Topic: Have you?
joejealousy's photo
Tue 03/08/11 11:25 PM
have ya ever been so sauced
you tossed your boss
across a loft?

have you ever been so high
you try to deny a lie
but your so fried
you let it slide
you lied
about the lie you denied?
so you slide back
try to take the lie back
change the subject with a wise crack
but she jumps right back
you decide that
despite that
she came right back like that
you fight back
and your right back
where you started at

I've seen better days
I better get a raise
need to get a debt erased
never let a debtor skate
better set your debtor straight
better bet I'm getting paid
never place your faith
in a pretty face
end up in a $hitty place
a little taste is all it takes
to make a wallet break
and i fall from grace
in the halls of fate
there's a wall of greats
a face from every race
and as of late
there's an empty space
tempting many preempting fate




no photo
Wed 03/09/11 12:57 AM
Well I've been high
but never lied
enjoyed the trip
thinking I'm hip
but gave it up
when I had my kids
best thing I ever did...

Cool write again Joe..


JamieRawxx's photo
Wed 03/09/11 07:13 PM
Both of them very good writes

DaringDervish's photo
Wed 03/09/11 09:44 PM
Now rap that really fast.

no photo
Wed 03/09/11 10:02 PM
Don't keep smacking yourself in the head,
damn it your ALIVE,,,not dead.
When they look at you, like they hate you.
Got a gun in hand, lookin at you saying, FU.
Look um in their eye and say,
HEY, JUST DO-IT IF YA WANT TO?
I got nothin to live for,
and I damn sure ain't worth the price of that bullet.
or the damn chalk there use around my cold body,
here on the floor.
So let me live, or your finger on the trigger and pull-it.



blushing I just hate passing up a chance to be silly,,lol
GREAT write Joe and rap is cool expressions...drinker