live more, love more
adore her to the core
for richer or poorer
restore our repore
I implore her for more
before, she moves towards the door
and I'm forced to ignore
my wondering's,
of what could have been in store
for me and my Amore
if only I'd been more adoring
i could have changed the ending of the story
but still I'm defending the previous ending
and my reasons for distorting
so many seasons with my girl
even though she was my world
my feelings swirl
twist and turn
with a heart so cold, how can feelings burn?
I'm heartless, but you hurt me with words
our love is for the birds
they can take it and fly away
I'm not your guy today
but, I'm your man tomorrow
I plan to borrow
a fan, to air out our sorrow
one won't do it, so i will have to borrow
a car load
to air out our load
I need a pair of hard toed
boots, to walk down our road
have a bat in hand
to smack back the demons
and the evil man, i know i can be
but, just as sure as I'm standing
I know i can be
a man that's manly
and do right for my family
but planning
don't do a damn thing
but strand me
and it can be, demanding
at times
it's the reason for these rhymes
to vent from these signs
that it's the end of times
for me and mine
defending why, I lie to my
heart and mind
my eyes start to blind
from still waters that run deep
goes to being dark from sunny
everyone thinks it's funny, but me
why couldn't you hug me
and just love me
instead of making things so ugly
and saying F*<k me
kicking me to the curb
without so much as a word
an adjective or verb
I'd be glad to give
but it's too sad to live
together
we make it storm in sunny weather
but, that's just the norm for us together
i want you back
but i want to slap
myself, for the dealings dealt
and feelings felt
I'm feeling well, here in hell
all by myself, so here i dwell
without you, despite you
I doubt you
and I'm not about to
go through, what we went through
no, thank you
there's a girl for me, but it ain't you
but, I love you
always thinking of you
put no girl above you
wish i could undo
our fights
but your not the one wasting nights
hating life
and debating why

How strange


How strange i found the way you walk
Away from me...
SO dried i found the way we talk
The meaning of the word died
Somewere between your lips and my tumb
Who gives colour on them and feel so numb
By him self.
Were is your hand wich wraps me in the ivory set of down
And fly me to everything wich begun with us?
How strange i found today the way you pick the flowers
IS like they never meet your beatiful hand
LIke your thoughts never walked me...and did not understand..
How strange i found the way i search your breath
Wich lay on my palms like an old written map
Of my soul...
How....strange my live is pouring without you
LIke water in a broken glass...
Not much...like a strow and senseless less...


kate...same romanian girl.

thanks for sharing that. nice write.

Thank you. Is written difrent than english poetry:) The way i draw the text is a different style, has ryme and white lirycs. I fell happy that finally i can post something written by me and being received. :) I use to hang out on romanian forums, they are not intro poetry. Love it, its my way to express the way i fell.

well i think all styles of creative writing are meaningful. It's all about individuality, and expressing your inner most feelings without fear of reprisal. writing rhymes is something i have done since i was old enough to hold a pencil, it's a positive way to vent frustration, express happiness, or just create something beautiful with nothing more than words. I really hope you post more or your poems, I look forward to reading your next masterpiece.:)

hehehe besides problems gived by life wich need to be solved, i love writting.

I writte in general about one thing, wich i miss the moust....afection of a man who cares about me, loves me the way i am. :)

i will....promise as i promise to sadie:)

I can kind of put myself in place in this write i can relate to it.
Put some chills on me, haha