Topic: You Are Not There
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Thu 07/05/07 06:19 AM
I have walked through the valley of darkness
Fighting my way through
A long journey it has been
I now walk in the valley of light
My journey has just begun
It seems as if I dance in the sun
A gentle meadow lay at my feet
Wildflowers blooming
Smelling so sweetly
Bees buzzing about on their way
Deer even coming out to play
But it all seems so empty
So gray and unreal
I should be feeling the happiness
I should be reveling in the wonder of it all
Yet all I feel is sadness
Tears slip from my eyes
Nothing makes sense
Not even the clear blue skies
This beautiful valley is empty of you
I look to my side and you are not there

pl9864's photo
Thu 07/05/07 06:24 AM
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*In his best Forrest Gump voice*
Jennaaaaayy

Good morning beautifulblushing .Very nice piece,I really enjoyed it hon.

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Thu 07/05/07 06:25 AM
Did you write that? If so your a really talented writer. I really liked the poem!

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Thu 07/05/07 06:26 AM
Very nice CCP flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Thu 07/05/07 06:28 AM
Melanie you will find a lot of very talented writers here.I like to consider myself one(regardless of what other people thinklaugh ).If you click on the poems forum you can scroll down and read other things by Miss Poet and even myself.She is an awesome writer and a beautiful person in general.You'll get to know some of so jump right in and have fun.Welcome to JSHflowerforyou flowerforyou

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Thu 07/05/07 06:35 AM
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Thu 07/05/07 08:09 AM
Beautiful Poet, so well written, it will happen. I have faith. flowerforyou flowerforyou