I'm sick as hell
But I'm getting well
went to sit and fell
into the pits of hell
with this i tell
because of this i dwell
as a shell
of my former self
it's the form i felt
was normal for myself
in abnormal health
so in this form i dwelt
til my dome was swelled
and i feel it held
all the feelings felt
cause of all the dealings dealt
my soul I'd sell
to escape this cell
with an elated yell
or horrific scream
to wake, from this prolific dream
with this i mean
i wish i seen
a way to cease and assist my scheme
to make this green
and resist this scene
with this relentless being
who's demented pleading
helped to make me greedy
with this life that's seedy
and it's defeating
me completely
I'm retreating
from this beating
and I'm needing
these pills I'm eating
this girls conceded
gods gift to the world, she's treated
never done the things that we did
but she's still a sweetie
and for her, my heart is bleeding
it's scarred, yet beating
but, far from completed
sitting in my car, outside the bar so heated
trying so hard, not to go back to drinking
sitting here simply thinking
bout these feelings that are sinking
my phone is ringing
our song it's singing
but, I'm not answering it
right now, were not discussing $hit
the fire is burning, no need to feed it
no need to beg and plead with
me, cause i know ya cheated
how could ya sleep with
some random creep, this
is messed up, so peep this
i want nothing we had together
our house just keep it
I'm not about to doubt my feelings
I mean it

Brilliant write...

That's.. amazing :)

ya - its' really good joe

sell this **** as a rap to eminem bro like no lie do it

lol, wish i could. that would definitely solve some of my problems.

very amazing.