Topic: what makes love, love?
joejealousy's photo
Fri 01/21/11 10:11 PM
what makes love, love?
its just two people that kiss and hug
and when their gone, you miss them much
and you miss their touch
but when she's mad, she bit<hs so much
your fists clinch up
and your muscles tense up
and ya can't make sense of
how this is love
its just 2 people that Fu<k
it goes no deeper than luck
if they get stuck together, in the same rut
and put up, with each other til their brains bust
and ya see it for what it is, insane lust
and head games plus
pain that drains both of us
thought there was no-one as close as us
so here's a toast to us
as i boast to us
how our relationship is a joke to us
hell, its a joke to most
who know us both
and those who know me best
can tell, I'm always stressed
pacing the hallways pressed
facing the pain in my chest
tracing the vein in my wrist
with a blade for kicks
chasing my dreams and $hit
but since I'm in "love"
i gotta give em up
and give my love, my life
but that's what love is right
i do all that, yet you still love to fight
despite, the fact i work all day,and half the night
just to treat my family right
and keep my family tight
provide food, water, and light
keep these damn diapers in stock
and the fridge full after i shop
wish i could manipulate the clock
so I'm not late for work
cause my boss is a jerk
still need to iron my shirt
today I'm gonna get fired for sure
I'm so tired i hurt
but, I'm a fighter for them
and a provider for her


no photo
Fri 01/21/11 11:43 PM
:heart: Love is what we never find when we're looking, never have when we need-it, and never touch it, til its gone....


A beautiful write my friend,,,COOL....drinker

joejealousy's photo
Sat 01/22/11 07:52 AM
-Love is what we never find when we're looking, never have when we need-it, and never touch it, til its gone....

*huh, never thought of it that way. that actually makes sense. thanks for dropping that knowledge on me. and if ya don't mind i might incorporate that into one of my writes later on down the road. because i can't think of a better way to word it.



JamieRawxx's photo
Tue 02/01/11 09:36 AM
I can really relate to this write. Very good job.