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on the move not much to prove im winning the battle i thought i would lose hmm, whats else to do hmmmmm, the thought has grew i love me more than me so you, i have choosed. |
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(((J)))
![]() The only one that can "choose" if it is right or not is you my friend ![]() |
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im here on the move not much to prove im winning the battle i thought i would lose hmm, whats else to do hmmmmm, the thought has grew i love me more than me so you, i have choosed. adding to your poem the battle is no game as you see through the light and nothing you will not loose as you have grown to see who has brought you the love even though it may not be the one you tend to seek as remember love can be built inside and out |
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Seems like forever since I've read anything of yours. Not sure if that's you or my lack of checking in here LOL, but either way it was worth the wait.
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growing is such a great feeling and I enjoyed this write J
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THANK YOU ALL for the replies.
and Davey you haven't missed any of my writes. lol! i haven't been nearly as active as i would like to be. i might have posted 5 poems in the last 6 months. which is equivalent to two days worth when i first joined this site almost 3 years ago, wow, 3 years already lol. crazy... |
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good to see you around...
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Always a pleasure to read your stuff. Especially like this one!! You always move me!
![]() Joanie |
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