Topic: Skeletons
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Mon 07/02/07 04:50 PM
Drama, mama, attention seeker.
Look at me, look at me.
Skeletons tucked in dark closets,
but dont see, dont see,
lips pursed in pious indignation
spitting out bile, tipped with sharp poisoned barbs,
fear ridden, terror stricken.
Will they know? Will they see?
Deep dark recesses, cancerous pores,
point the fingers, point the fingers.
There look! But not at me, not at me.
Golden child chased through the night,
words nipping and tearing, with sharp edged teeth,
struggling, falling, brought to knees.
See her, feel her, hear her pleas.
Bright eyes piercing, staring in righteous wrath,
as drama, mama, attention seeker.
Eye slitted and sly with joyous glee,
fingers pointed, shrieks look at the golden one.
Watch her fall, watch her burn,
but dont see me, dont see me.
Tuck skeletons back into her closet,
small child crying helplessly.
Drama, mama, attention seeker.
Grasping fingers pointed, reaching out,
whispers in the dark, come to me,
come to me, come to me

LAMom's photo
Mon 07/02/07 05:18 PM
Wow!! We all have skeletons in our closets,,, Some we let out and others we keep deep inside,,, Beautiful once again,,, Amazing your grace and flow is amazing...

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Mon 07/02/07 05:29 PM
Once again...thank you for the lovely words..I appreciate them.....I just recently started writing poetry and Im still uncertain...

LAMom's photo
Mon 07/02/07 05:30 PM
No need to feel uncertain,,, I have enjoyed your work and will continue to read,,,,flowerforyou

oldsage's photo
Mon 07/02/07 05:38 PM
Just keep writing, everything I have read was impressive.
You make a fantastic addititon to the group/site.
WELCOME

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Mon 07/02/07 05:48 PM
True that;LaMom & OldSage my very dear friends.She has a splendid imagination & a very uncanny ability to pull the reader in headlong & hold them there.No uncertainty should ever lie within her.U Rawk!gurl.I luv it big-time.(((bear~hugs)))Godspeed!Cybear,your bearific friend forever & a day.;=) :tongue: flowerforyou blushing embarassed

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Mon 07/02/07 05:55 PM
Skeletons stuffed in a dark closet. The southern phrase of dirty laundry whose stench is crying to be aired out - IMHO: They both induce fear and other nasty stifling emotions. Slowly but surely become aware of the chain, dismantle it link by link, transmute it to a position of strength; thereby, the children of future generations may not become links in that long ago hidden and unknowingly lengthened chain.

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Mon 07/02/07 07:10 PM
Thank you people...I thoroughly appreciate your welcomes and compliments! I will continue to post!

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 07/02/07 07:24 PM
Yayyyyy!!!!!!

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Mon 07/02/07 07:37 PM
MsWizard,

Very deep, full of thought.


nice!!!!!!!!!

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Mon 07/02/07 07:39 PM
thank you MG.....

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Mon 07/02/07 09:37 PM
To my personal friend in real life(not cyber).I told u, u have tallent.Keep writing Wizzy my friend....want me to give u any little tid bits to get u writing.....I am eating gold fish...hhahaha...I want that bigger fish bowl.....go girl...miss u lots...zannie

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Mon 07/02/07 09:39 PM
Wizzy...u have that hat and cape and wand out?????

who's the guy below u???? nice......

transientmind's photo
Mon 07/02/07 10:24 PM
What a beautiful emotional exorcism, I enjoyed it.flowerforyou

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Mon 07/02/07 11:13 PM
thank you Transient....:smile:

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Mon 07/02/07 11:13 PM
Hey hey Zanne!! Hiya sister...thank you darling I so appreciate the compliments..I love you too!

p.s. I dont know who the guy is...this is MY first day...grin..