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Portrait821's photo
Sun 12/19/10 07:39 PM
I sit here.
Pain filling my heart as
I think to myself, how long
will this last?
Tensions rising between us
like the overflowing of
water out of a drinking glass.
yet I sit here, so naive
in thinking that soul crushing
troubles like this will pass.
They say family lasts forever,
then why does it seem as
if this one is fading so fast?

Sharris's photo
Sun 12/19/10 08:10 PM

I sit here.
Pain filling my heart as
I think to myself, how long
will this last?
Tensions rising between us
like the overflowing of
water out of a drinking glass.
yet I sit here, so naive
in thinking that soul crushing
troubles like this will pass.
They say family lasts forever,
then why does it seem as
if this one is fading so fast?

You can feel the pain gripping as hope slips away.
This feels very personal. Thank you for sharing.

kc0003's photo
Sun 12/19/10 08:15 PM
welcome...flowerforyou

Gossipmpm's photo
Sun 12/19/10 08:19 PM
I really love the feel of the younger poets
To me
They have a true hold on the world around them

They seem to be able to bring up intricate thoughts
And put them in a more modern way

I just love it!!:heart:

Portrait821's photo
Sun 12/19/10 08:19 PM


I sit here.
Pain filling my heart as
I think to myself, how long
will this last?
Tensions rising between us
like the overflowing of
water out of a drinking glass.
yet I sit here, so naive
in thinking that soul crushing
troubles like this will pass.
They say family lasts forever,
then why does it seem as
if this one is fading so fast?

You can feel the pain gripping as hope slips away.
This feels very personal. Thank you for sharing.

No problem.

Portrait821's photo
Sun 12/19/10 08:21 PM

I really love the feel of the younger poets
To me
They have a true hold on the world around them

They seem to be able to bring up intricate thoughts
And put them in a more modern way

I just love it!!:heart:

thats the first time i ever hear that before...makes me want to continue even more. Thanks! <3