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I leave the tears
for they have no place freeing my heart I reach for beauty I surrender I surrender to be |
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I leave the tears for they have no place freeing my heart I reach for beauty I surrender I surrender to be you have a tremendous ability to say so much with so few words. Very powerful. |
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S....thankyou...so very much for your words.
manOfewwords....you're still reading...smile. teasingbrunette |
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I leave the tears for they have no place freeing my heart I reach for beauty I surrender I surrender  BUT WHEN I LEFT THE TEARS AND TURNED TO BEAUTY IT DAWNED TEARS WERE NECESSARY IN LIFE IT SOFTENED YOU MORE AND MADE YOUR INNER EYES SENSITIVE TO BEAUTY AND LOVE AND SURRENDER TO FREEDOM you have a tremendous ability to say so much with so few words. Very powerful. |
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teasingbrunette, I enjoy reading your poems, especially those that are lighthearted and playful, such as Taste ("fresh morning snow / tops the mountain edge / caressing tree tops / seeing how far / whiteness can go / white / white").
I also like haridassk's version of ~reverence  "TEARS WERE NECESSARY IN LIFE /IT SOFTENED YOU MORE / AND MADE YOUR INNER EYES SENSITIVE TO BEAUTY / AND LOVE". His optimistic flare resonates with me more than the stoic "I leave the tears / for they have no place". Thanks for the inspiration. Since I'm new to this community, I would like to know if it's acceptable for someone who hasn't posted his / her own poems to critique others'. Just wondering. |
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