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Topic: disgusted
Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Fri 11/26/10 09:28 PM
My head aches at your disgrace my eyes burn with tears for you my lips pursed at the mention of your name my heart broken at the failure of your game I move on yes i do I still care unlike you my heart warms with my new freedom Eyes squinting at my bright future you are gone gone gone so be gone and forget me for you are long forgotten. . . there is no end to this poem like a memory. . .

thewaterbearer Joined Sun 10/25/09 Posts: 19759	Fri 11/26/10 09:57 PM
Sad but beautiful, nice write

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Sat 11/27/10 05:49 AM


Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Sat 11/27/10 04:52 PM
thank you both.

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sat 11/27/10 05:05 PM
a sad discourse. Well penned.

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 11/27/10 05:15 PM
nicely done.

Simonedemidova Joined Mon 11/15/10 Posts: 8952	Sat 11/27/10 06:42 PM
thank you, not too sad to say goodbye to someone- lol

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