Topic: Sanity's Sake
kc0003's photo
Mon 11/22/10 12:22 PM
(first draft, very rough)

with sleep weary eyes
I rise
and trip over
the morning
a walk down the hall,
surprise,
I hear the phone ring

I don’t pick it up
I know it’s not you
go straight to the window
pretend there’s a view
another day in the life
of a man better known
as a fool

the gallon of coffee I’ve poured in my head
doesn’t do the trick, so I slip back to bed
and listen to the echo of a memory I hear,
as I think of you

I couldn’t laugh enough to safe me
I didn’t cry enough not to break
I close my eyes and drift off to safety
and pray I don’t dream…..for sanity’s sake

the afternoon rush
goes by quiet
without me
the late evening news
plays in the
background
again

and the dinner I planned
still waits at the store
maybe tomorrow
I’ll walk out this door,
but today’s not the day
it’s just another one
I drink away

the gallon of gin I’ve poured down my head
doesn’t do the trick, so I crawl back to bed
and rewind a memory I saw when I thought of you

I didn’t cry enough to save me
I couldn’t laugh enough not to break
I close my eyes and drift off to safety
and pray I don’t dream of you,
for sanity’s sake

I swear I tried enough to save us
I didn’t mean for all this to break
I can’t find a moment of safety
and I can’t stop thinking for my own
sanity’s sake




kc '10

LAMom's photo
Mon 11/22/10 08:28 PM
flowers :heart:

Such sorrow in those eyes,,, Sighhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

kc0003's photo
Mon 11/22/10 08:35 PM
no...no sorrow

a friend on one of my nieces was
playing this song the other day
and someone told him to talk to me
about fixing the lyrics...so i tossed
it about and re-wrote it for him...
there is not much left of his work,
but he sang it today and it works for
the most part...i'll fine tune it....

LAMom's photo
Mon 11/22/10 09:07 PM

no...no sorrow

a friend on one of my nieces was
playing this song the other day
and someone told him to talk to me
about fixing the lyrics...so i tossed
it about and re-wrote it for him...
there is not much left of his work,
but he sang it today and it works for
the most part...i'll fine tune it....


Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh no sorrow... yeaaaaaaaaaaaa

Hugs to you,,
Have an awesome Thanksgiving flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Mon 11/22/10 09:18 PM
you too...:heart:

Rhearabies's photo
Tue 11/23/10 11:29 AM
Beautiful flowerforyou

ultimatecubsfan65's photo
Tue 11/23/10 12:06 PM
Rough draft my ***.... it's perfect!