Topic: nighttime
s1owhand's photo
Fri 11/19/10 01:50 AM
nighttime
and i slept
peaceful water surface
quiet like glass
motion of breathing
a nearly imperceptible
wave
personal tide

no dreaming here
no waking up
falling again
in the dark cold
oxygenless depths
with wrecks and silt
dense sea night
time

the clock is dead
the world still turns
a few restless
souls
pass under blinking streetlights
scuttling
in the city drizzle
until nighttime
disappears

LAMom's photo
Fri 11/19/10 09:27 AM
Softly,, ever so motionless
Hush thy child
Sleep

Beautiful ((( H )))):heart:

DaveyB's photo
Fri 11/19/10 01:34 PM
I haven't been around here much lately but I don't recall seeing anything from you before S1owhand. It reads very smoothly and carries quite a bit of emotion. Nice.

bastet126's photo
Fri 11/19/10 02:40 PM
kinda reminds me of if a dali painting could talk. idk why. very cool! flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Fri 11/19/10 03:55 PM
(((D))) :heart:

Thanks DaveyB - I write from time to time.... drinker

bastet - must be the "timing" flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Fri 11/19/10 05:10 PM
bigsmile ...not often enough!

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 11/19/10 07:20 PM
smooched

s1owhand's photo
Sun 11/21/10 02:51 PM
Edited by s1owhand on Sun 11/21/10 02:53 PM
smooched and thanks kc! i always enjoy reading your words...

no photo
Mon 11/22/10 04:42 AM
:smile: drinker

s1owhand's photo
Tue 11/23/10 05:36 AM
you're in a good mood 'cause it's hockey season!!

drinker

hi cy, and thanks for reading :smile: