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nighttime
and i slept peaceful water surface quiet like glass motion of breathing a nearly imperceptible wave personal tide no dreaming here no waking up falling again in the dark cold oxygenless depths with wrecks and silt dense sea night time the clock is dead the world still turns a few restless souls pass under blinking streetlights scuttling in the city drizzle until nighttime disappears |
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Softly,, ever so motionless
Hush thy child Sleep Beautiful ((( H )))) |
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I haven't been around here much lately but I don't recall seeing anything from you before S1owhand. It reads very smoothly and carries quite a bit of emotion. Nice.
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kinda reminds me of if a dali painting could talk. idk why. very cool!
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(((D)))
Thanks DaveyB - I write from time to time.... bastet - must be the "timing" |
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...not often enough!
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Edited by
s1owhand
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Sun 11/21/10 02:53 PM
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and thanks kc! i always enjoy reading your words...
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you're in a good mood 'cause it's hockey season!!
hi cy, and thanks for reading |
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