Topic: Lost in the Weeds
Adrift's photo
Sat 06/30/07 05:07 AM
Flirt with evil, yet try to go my own way. Trying to walk a path of darkness without losing sight of the sunlight. Now the sunlight has vanished. Lost, have no lantern, no compass to guide. Stumble along a path so choked and overrun with weeds. Can not see where to step. There is no end to it.


Just something that kept rolling around in my head, lol.

transientmind's photo
Sat 06/30/07 05:13 AM
I like it, reminds me of what a friend said recently.

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Tue 07/03/07 11:48 AM
The root to all evil was planted long ago
choices you made, subconsciously or other, we'll never know,
YOU made your own path, and YOU let the sunshine disappear
in your absence, clouds appeared, and
the storms never cleared

Trust was broken with evil spirits afoot
there ws no redemption for either one of us
As the rain fell, weeds grew higher and higher,
and our forest of love was overgrown
and we couldnt rise above it
and the winds blew harder and harder
filling your sails taking you out to sea
farther and farther away
away from me and "us"

I wanted to be your lantern and your light
I wanted to be enough to make you fight
and find your sunlight
I wanted to be the compass that led you home
and I was here stumbling along
the same path we made together
now overgrown

I gave you all I could
and you say you did too
but it was just never enough
and "I'm Sorry" couldnt get us through
the weeds are high, and sunlight is gone
now we both walk along, together
yet alone
Darkness surrounds, but I am not afraid
My steps though unsure, I have to go on
Over the horizon I see
A glimpse of sunrise
and I hope to be
able to open my eyes and see
it's beauty once again...

6/03/2007
SCG


:cry: brokenheart

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 07/03/07 12:52 PM
Asrift those are good things to have floating around in ones head keeps our minds thinking.


My My girl the things you can do with words love itbigsmile