Can someone please take a look and tell me whats wrong with my profile, what needs to be changed or added, any help will be most greatfull thanks

It looks good to me. Sometimes it's hit or miss with online dating. Join in the forums and let people get to know you and you can get to know them.

best of luck to you

thanks

Wow, actually you have one of the best profiles I've seen
on here. As Kim said, post in the forums and get to know
people-it's great exposure for letting people get to really
know you on a regular basis, and vice versa.

I think your profile is Very Good. But I know you REALLY wanted some input/attention from some of the guys

IMHO
1. i found the profile to be very well written, with few errors. making it look like a letter (paragraphs) made it easier to read. you gave enough information to paint a mental picture, but left enough to the imagination so as not to seem too picky.
B. if you mention sports, be specific. following the local team isn't going to cut it with a sports nut. pick a team and cheer win or lose.
5.walks in park, bbq, etc. are all interests everyone likes. when talking about what you like mention stuff like aligator wrestling or things out of the norm. personally the romance novel thing was a downer, because i may watch a chick flick with you, but book reading is like masterbating, you don't need a partner.
E.mentioning specific places you frequent was nice, just be careful someone local could recognize you and not all people are nice. overall good job, i rate it three snaps in a "z" formation. so in conclusion change what you want, it's fine if you stay with what you have, either way be patient, these things take time.

p.s. the age limits are also limiting your chances of a reply

Ya, I would also remove ALL
your listed parameters.

People from the forums cannot
contact you.

Nice profile, can't complain :-)

OP, this. and look out dear abby!! to coin a phrase, three snaps in a 'z' formation ese!!

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Tammy

you like that one huh

I think your 'teddy bear' headline is kinda cute and the rest seems fine. If you try to write a profile that will make the angels weep in hopes that The Perfect Guy will fall out of the sky, the smart money will see it as being too contrived and deploy their parachutes.

More than anything, finding True Love on these sites is like shopping at Wal*Mart-- you have to rifle through a lot of cheap merch to find that one-of-a-kind future family heirloom in the clearance aisle.

-Kerry O. <---- roadkill on the Internet Highway of Love

Your profile looks good. Get into the forums, meets some people. You take care of ten 3 year olds, so I know you have patience. Being from Wisconsin, you should be a Packer fan. It's a plus

thanks to all that replied

I don't know if you are getting more replies since posting here. I do think that expanding your age range is a good idea. You can always ignore the immature and mind numbing.

Without mentioning where you live, I can't imagine that your area is that different from my area. Limiting distance may seem reasonable, but things can be worked out without an expectation of staying the night. If you meet the right person and get married, relocation is a possibility.

Just my opinion. I hope it helps.