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Topic: Loving You From a Distance
pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Sat 10/16/10 06:08 AM
Its like I'm a different person and the old me just Disappeared I What a powerful line. Hugs to you....writing thing down does help.

Torgo70 Joined Fri 06/27/08 Posts: 27387	Sat 10/16/10 06:25 AM
Really amazing stuff, Kiss.

kissablekiss Joined Mon 03/08/10 Posts: 8528	Sat 10/16/10 06:52 AM
I shall leave you If i have to I shall forget you If i have to I shall forgive you If i have to But i shall not hate you Even if i have to How can i hate you, Whom i have loved so devotedly And so unreservedly?

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Sat 10/16/10 07:06 AM


Dodo_David Joined Fri 08/13/10 Posts: 48926	Sat 10/16/10 07:23 AM
Bruises may heal but scares are never forgotten. Why do we sleep when the next day we wake to still live with yesterday. Remember the feelings Remember the day my stone heart was breaking Wow, such powerful words. Kiss, you deserve

Marianne Joined Sat 09/15/07 Posts: 50	Tue 10/19/10 08:16 PM
As words flow across the screen Relationships are discussed Positions dreamed, Frustration intensifies You say fate has brought us together But circumstances ever let us be as one..... love it

actionlynx Joined Wed 08/18/10 Posts: 5448	Fri 11/19/10 05:33 PM
I just read every one of Sam's poems - sad, powerful, and from the gut. I don't ever stop writing, Sam.

kissablekiss Joined Mon 03/08/10 Posts: 8528	Fri 11/19/10 06:32 PM
sadly i dnt write anymore

ValentinaSS Joined Sun 05/23/10 Posts: 966	Fri 11/19/10 06:40 PM
that is sad. maybe the urge will come back to you someday

kissablekiss Joined Mon 03/08/10 Posts: 8528	Fri 11/19/10 06:57 PM
maybe

actionlynx Joined Wed 08/18/10 Posts: 5448	Fri 11/19/10 07:12 PM
No maybes. Don't make me get medieval.

krupa Joined Thu 07/03/08 Posts: 18651	Fri 11/19/10 07:30 PM
I say...Good for you Baby! You had the guts to take a chance. Most people would rather be safe and never have a shot at finding thier souls desire. It takes a special soul to put your heart in anothers hands....courage like that is rare. so you get dumped on.....baby, it is the pain that forges us into stronger souls. The meloncholy tears in the shallows of night and the helpless frustration is something we all endure. And boy does it suck monkey balz. They say time heals all wound. I say "They" are full of s**t! The pain will fade....eventually the anguish will be cast into the tracks that you leave behind you but, we dont forget the scars. When the day comes again .....your heart will ache for a love that seems so reachable. Go for it! Dont second guess all the "what ifs"....When you will no longer risk the pain...your chance for true happiness will be forever gone. Bite into the pain.........it will pass. That moment when you know true love.........then you will see that the lonely nights in Hell were worth it. My heart is with ya girl. Now...wipe away that snot bubble.

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Fri 11/19/10 08:37 PM
The hottest love has the Coldest end. I opened myself up I let it all out I told you everything Because i had no doubts But now im left with nothing because you didnt feel the same All i have is a Broken heart and im the one to be blame Seeing you everyday isnt what hurts the most -is seeing you while your starring at her that kills Bruises may heal but scares are never forgotten. Why do we sleep when the next day we wake to still live with yesterday. Remember the feelings Remember the day my stone heart was breaking love it

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Fri 11/19/10 10:13 PM
Ms Kiss, i hope in time you will write again

kissablekiss Joined Mon 03/08/10 Posts: 8528	Sat 11/20/10 01:21 AM
ok thanx hugs