Last Words


I'm not mad,
I'm just sad.

How could it be,
Is it really me?

What did I do wrong?
But we made it this long.

I told you I love you,
What else can I do?

Please give me another chance,
I might be able to advance.

I won't forget the way I kissed your lips,
Or the way you swayed your hips.

You are still my butter cup,
Even though we just broke up.


David Scotty Stuart

DAVID WOW YU'RE SO NICE THE WAY THAT U WROTED, SO U KNOW THT'S THE BEST
WAY TO SAY WHAT U FELL I THINK THAT U FALL IN LOVETHAT'S HWY U WROTED
THAT TO THAT GUIRL SO ''THE LAST WORDS'' I THINK THAT MEANS THAT IS THE
LAST TIME THAT U REMEMBER HER BUT THAT'S IT OR IS OVER.WELL JUST LET ME
TOLD U SOMETHING TRY TO FORGET THE PAST & TRY TO FINDSOMEONE OR GIVE A
CHANCE TO SOMEONE ELSE TO LOVE U,BUT MAYBE U GOT ASK U'RESELF ''WHO IS
THE RIGTH GUIRL??????......''THE ANSWER IS THAT MAYBE SHE'S IN FRONT OF
U & UON'T KNOW.......WELL I WOULD LIKE TO TELL U MANY THIKS BU I GOT TO
MEET U FIRST I KNOW U JUST POR THE PICTURE, BUT THE MUST IMPORTAN FOR ME
ITHE WAY THAT U'RE THE DAVID FROM INSIDE NO OUTSIDE OK ADDME
alexavenus@hotmail.com meet me like a friend if u want too ok
seeu.........

Good words man. Simply good.
I like what you wrote.
Feel free to post anything you want
on my site- www.soulsgate.com
Jim

Hey Jimi... I'm a writer too. I just poseted a poem on ur site. hope to
get the ball rollin

These last words were some of the first words on this forum. So for that, you get a bump.