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Topic: I wish
David_Stuart Joined Wed 10/04/06 Posts: 149	Sun 10/08/06 12:11 PM
I wish I wish I could be, what you want to see. I wish you could tell, that I love you well. I wish you could hear, all these crying tears. I wish you knew, what I feel about you. I wish you'll open your mind, and let our mind intertwine. I wish I could hold you, when ever you feel blue. I wish I could kiss you, but im afraid to. I wish I could try, to not be shy. I wish we could be together, but you said friends forever. I wish you could see, we were ment to be. David Scotty Stuart

Monique27 Joined Tue 08/15/06 Posts: 325	Tue 10/10/06 08:37 PM
Gosh, baby boy Who broke your heart? It's gonna be ok... really

Jimi366 Joined Fri 09/15/06 Posts: 672	Tue 10/10/06 08:46 PM
Another good one. Visit my creative writing site at www.soulsgate.com and feel free to post there anytime. You have talent. You capture emotion and display it in words.

samantha198403 Joined Thu 09/14/06 Posts: 160	Tue 10/10/06 11:08 PM
this is definately from the heart, cant wait to see more samantha

tretia Joined Tue 09/12/06 Posts: 183	Wed 10/11/06 12:45 PM
its beautiful, david

Inssanity Joined Sun 10/07/12 Posts: 14	Thu 11/15/12 10:22 AM
Loved it!!my story relates to it.good writing.keep it up:)

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Thu 11/15/12 07:35 PM
Loved it!!my story relates to it.good writing.keep it up:) Nice write It was originally posted by on Sun 10/08/06....

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