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Topic: New Town
johnnyheartbeep Joined Mon 09/27/10 Posts: 33	Wed 09/29/10 03:34 PM
New Town Coming to a new town Born again in asphalt fumes In urine smells And sonic booms Crowded in a streetcar Tally up the broken souls The goddesses On birth control The businessmen On mobile phones The downturned eyes And muted tones The drugs The sex The rock ‘n’ roll Watching from a distance The city’s voice, a steady roar So like a heartbeat Like a whore

bgeorge Joined Fri 09/14/07 Posts: 7850	Wed 09/29/10 04:48 PM


Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sat 10/02/10 06:35 PM
This is raw and seethes with city. Strong descriptions.

johnnyheartbeep Joined Mon 09/27/10 Posts: 33	Sat 10/02/10 08:46 PM
Thanks guys

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Mon 10/04/10 11:49 AM
could be a song, really enjoyed the mood set!

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Mon 10/04/10 11:51 AM
Loooovvvveeeedddd it buddy!!!! It was real!!!!!

johnnyheartbeep Joined Mon 09/27/10 Posts: 33	Tue 10/05/10 05:15 PM
Thanks again. Getting used to Toronto by now, but it sure can be a STRANGE place. A song ... hmmmm. Any volunteers to put music to it?

plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Tue 10/05/10 05:38 PM
Stunning imagery. Terrific write.

kyearley Joined Sat 11/28/09 Posts: 84	Wed 10/06/10 06:03 AM
Wow, incredibly enjoyed.

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