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I heard the dogs howl in the moonlight night
I went to the window to see the sight All the Dead that ever I knew Going one by one and two by two On they pass'd, and on they pass'd Townsfellows all, from first to last Born in the moonlight of the lane Quench'd in the heavy shadow again Schoolmates, marching as when we play'd At soldiers once—but now more staid Those were the strangest sight to me Who were drown'd, I knew, in the awful sea Straight and handsome folk; bent and weak, too Some that I loved, and gasp'd to speak to Some but a day in their churchyard bed Some that I had not known were dead |
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Wow. Great write. It feels much older than it is and the tone fits well.
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I really enjoyed this.
Strange, dark, perhaps gothic. "Born in the moonlight of the lane" is my favourite line. And the images of the wandering dead are ace! |
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You know, the more i keep re-reading this, the more i think it's great. So moved by it i am, that i have had to get drunk and stoned in front of my computer, which is possibly not a good idea, as i dont think computers and alchohol/drugs mix very well. However, i think i will go to bed tonight with the pleasure of a really dark fantsy about zombies and moonlight and some rural vilage out in the styx somwhere, whilst i am all snuggly and warm, wrapped up in my duvet.
As i have allready said, i really like this poem, and now i am just stating to waffle on, so i think i'd better leave it here. |
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