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Topic: Feedback Apperciated
Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Mon 07/26/10 12:25 PM
Bright, bold, simple ... Recalls the four corners and a certain blessing ... And, I love greens and they are so healing, esp. to the Heart Chakra and the Wood Element's Liver/Gall Bladder Meridians ... So, I like it ... ... Consider the source, as I am in Natural Medicine ... Agree w/ Tammy, would need to see it in its home field of web page and font, etc. to better weigh in ... Thanks, I'll post a screen shot.

Dancere Joined Sun 04/06/08 Posts: 14561	Mon 07/26/10 12:33 PM
Bright, bold, simple ... Recalls the four corners and a certain blessing ... And, I love greens and they are so healing, esp. to the Heart Chakra and the Wood Element's Liver/Gall Bladder Meridians ... So, I like it ... ... Consider the source, as I am in Natural Medicine ... Agree w/ Tammy, would need to see it in its home field of web page and font, etc. to better weigh in ... Thanks, I'll post a screen shot. Cheers ... That would be helpful ... T, forgot to say that I love that it invokes 'motion' ... Always good, anything but inert!

Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Mon 07/26/10 12:47 PM
Sorry for the size, but here's a snap shot.

Dancere Joined Sun 04/06/08 Posts: 14561	Mon 07/26/10 01:06 PM
Ok, going off first gut instinct w/out any thought ... ??? As, that is how it will go here ... Too much green for me ... And the logo's shade does not marry well w/ the background, imho ... A silver logo might? Think cars ... I wouldn't consider all these greens a match ... I'm thinking a rework, while maintaining the simplistic, streamlined presentation you seem to be aiming for ... There is a 'Pop" of logo missing, it is dulled down here ... A better matched contrast needed! Trying to be as constructively critical as possible w/out steering ... I well realize YOU need to pick the colour shades ... ... Hope that helps!

motowndowntown Joined Wed 11/19/08 Posts: 21825	Mon 07/26/10 01:07 PM
Reminds me of a pot leaf for some reason. Can't see how it fits into the name of the site. But it is simple, bold, and easy to remember.

Fade2Black Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 50752	Mon 07/26/10 01:13 PM
So, just blades? not good or bad? Thanks There are good AND bad blades? Looks like the blades to a fan to me. But then I'm hot & have one blowing cool air on me as I write, so ya .. go figure. LOL

Fade2Black Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 50752	Mon 07/26/10 01:14 PM
although I have Irish blood .. I DO agree w/Dancere .. Too much green

Dancere Joined Sun 04/06/08 Posts: 14561	Mon 07/26/10 01:17 PM Edited by Dancere on Mon 07/26/10 01:23 PM
Yeah, lookin' back a 2nd time? I like better what is goin' on around and w/ the 'circled W's' ... Edit ... The W's have a 3 dimensional depth and movement surrounding them ... Find a way to make that happen at logo ... It is flat and dead compared to them!

Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Mon 07/26/10 01:21 PM
Thanks for the feedback, it's very helpful.

Totage Joined Sat 10/13/07 Posts: 24210	Wed 07/28/10 02:04 PM
I changed the logo a little more. Still working on it though. Right now I'm going to work on some ads though.

Gossipmpm Joined Tue 03/03/09 Posts: 19414	Wed 07/28/10 02:10 PM
What if on the original page yououtlined the pinwheel in black there is alot of green happening there

Fade2Black Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 50752	Wed 07/28/10 02:18 PM
I made this logo today for my website. It's nothing fancy or anything, but please tell me what you think. What do you get from it? I like the 2 colors better than 1 that you had before. I like that it's more fluid, not so straight as before - doesn't look like a fan anymore. More like ribbons in the wind

BonnyMiss Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15342	Wed 07/28/10 02:47 PM
Reminds me of a banana skin. Too much green, try another colour for the logo (perhaps?).