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Topic: can you figure it out?
grostad Joined Tue 06/08/10 Posts: 293	Sun 06/20/10 01:51 PM
I will be VERY impressed if anyone can figure out what this poem is about. Back and fourth, to and frow Watch the shadows dance Chace it down but let it go Can't wait for my last chance Love me today but leave me alone Touch me to feel me go Watch the shadows sing their silence Extinguish all the glow Just mask your face and run the race Chace light back to the dawn Cast off your embrace of fading grace Forsake the will that says "HOLD ON!" The creature plots the shadows fight To bring a most fiendish end Giving away my soul tonight My lovely, deadly trend My organ dies but coos and cries My life held in a box Hearing silent pines between the lines Now starts my latin pox I flew too high perhaps that's why I've lost my wings of wax Behind the eye so many die To pay the freedom tax

markc48 Joined Wed 05/07/08 Posts: 5536	Sun 06/20/10 02:09 PM
War

grostad Joined Tue 06/08/10 Posts: 293	Sun 06/20/10 02:29 PM
War um... no. never had that guess before what made you think of that?

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 06/20/10 02:30 PM
Sounds like sperm talking..........IF they had a voice,

grostad Joined Tue 06/08/10 Posts: 293	Sun 06/20/10 02:42 PM
Sounds like sperm talking..........IF they had a voice, you mean your sperm don't talk? am i the only one or what?

nejai Joined Sat 06/19/10 Posts: 1	Sun 06/20/10 02:52 PM
Angels

markc48 Joined Wed 05/07/08 Posts: 5536	Sun 06/20/10 03:26 PM
After rereading it again. I think it's about an addict.

grostad Joined Tue 06/08/10 Posts: 293	Sun 06/20/10 03:55 PM
Angels interesting guess but no. where did you come up with that?

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 06/20/10 03:55 PM
A,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Match? A------potato? A---------I don'tknow riddles bring out the dumb in me,,

grostad Joined Tue 06/08/10 Posts: 293	Sun 06/20/10 03:59 PM
After rereading it again. I think it's about an addict. An addict!? now that's a good one. I had to take a read through it again. I can totally see where that would come from... wow. But no. wonderful guess

grostad Joined Tue 06/08/10 Posts: 293	Sun 06/20/10 04:03 PM
ha ha. you're bringing humor to the intellectual thicket. I'll give everyone a hint. try looking up a man named Caral Jung and listen to 46 and 2 by Tool.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 06/20/10 04:50 PM
I got the 46 X 2...but not really in THIS? To think THAT.. Changing, within, all, new, to become new again of IT,,our skins sort to speak,,as we lose all we believe in to see more through all that we have always excepted as true,,and to percieve what is THERE,as our new to be.. THERE ya go,,would all THAT be THIS,,because if so,,,NO,,I AM STILL ISSING "IT",,,wink,lol

grostad Joined Tue 06/08/10 Posts: 293	Sun 06/20/10 04:58 PM
I got the 46 X 2...but not really in THIS? To think THAT.. Changing, within, all, new, to become new again of IT,,our skins sort to speak,,as we lose all we believe in to see more through all that we have always excepted as true,,and to percieve what is THERE,as our new to be.. THERE ya go,,would all THAT be THIS,,because if so,,,NO,,I AM STILL ISSING "IT",,,wink,lol Sir you're on the right track... I think. truth be told that actually confused me a bit but you're getting there. you've lent not only humor but a machette to the intellectual thicket

misswright Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 1893	Sun 06/20/10 06:49 PM
Dreams?

grostad Joined Tue 06/08/10 Posts: 293	Sun 06/20/10 06:55 PM
Dreams? nope : (