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ok after reading through some of these I just gotta know about mine. I love the Internets ability to make any one a critic.
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I liked your profile...you sound nice and probably intelligent. I'm guessing you're going to hear: you need more pics.
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Edited by
2KidsMom
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Wed 06/02/10 11:49 AM
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meh..LOL..looked at the title to quick..thought it said "just wanna pee"
    welcome 
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Edited by
MelodyGirl
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Wed 06/02/10 12:33 PM
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Hi
 Here are some things to consider: - You need more pictures. - Unless you run your essay through spelling/grammar check, I wouldn’t tout that you are in college. You have a few errors. Also, I would add page breaks to create paragraphs; this allows easier reading rather than a jumbled, single paragraph. Your thoughts are rather disorganized. Maybe the paragraphs will help the continuity. - I would take out this statement because it makes you seem needy and “emo”: “Through out the years I have had plenty of relationships but I can never find the girl for me. I feel almost alone like there is no girl for me”. Stay positive and upbeat. That will also eliminate the error 'through out' - should be 'throughout'. - Add a few details about the type of girl you are attracted to in life, and expand on the hobbies you listed. Mingle is a blast. I hope to see you in the forums!  |
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meh..LOL..looked at the title to quick..thought it said "just wanna pee" welcome You come up with the wierdiest stuff sometimes!
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meh..LOL..looked at the title to quick..thought it said "just wanna pee" welcome You come up with the wierdiest stuff sometimes! And forgot 
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Hello im new to mingle. ummm show sme luv.
 would luv some pointers pls .
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Hello im new to mingle. ummm show sme luv. would luv some pointers pls . Start your own topic and you can get feedback too! 
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Yeah, what she said!
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meh..LOL..looked at the title to quick..thought it said "just wanna pee" welcome You come up with the wierdiest stuff sometimes! And forgot   |
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I have to disagree with some of the ladies on here...
I don't think you need anymore pics. The one you have up is good enough. It beats some of the other profile pics I have seen on here... at least yours shows your face. One can get a good feel on what you look like based on the one you have up. |
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I have to disagree with some of the ladies on here... I don't think you need anymore pics. The one you have up is good enough. It beats some of the other profile pics I have seen on here... at least yours shows your face. One can get a good feel on what you look like based on the one you have up. Everybody should have a least one smiling pic so we know they have nice teeth! I've met a couple of guys that never smiled in their pix and when we met in person their teeth were all mangled.  I ask for smiling pix now! 
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meh..LOL..looked at the title to quick..thought it said "just wanna pee" welcome You come up with the wierdiest stuff sometimes! And forgot
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thank you for the advice. but i will not change my punctuation because it is how i talk.
but i will get more pics, i just cant stand taking them of my self. Also, I have been checking out the community and I must say it seems like every one on here is way cool and I would like to meet any of you so your always welcome to hit me up. |
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thank you for the advice. but i will not change my punctuation because it is how i talk. but i will get more pics, i just cant stand taking them of my self. Also, I have been checking out the community and I must say it seems like every one on here is way cool and I would like to meet any of you so your always welcome to hit me up. Props for being YOU! 
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