ok after reading through some of these I just gotta know about mine. I love the Internets ability to make any one a critic.

I liked your profile...you sound nice and probably intelligent. I'm guessing you're going to hear: you need more pics.

meh..LOL..looked at the title to quick..thought it said "just wanna pee"


welcome

Hi

Here are some things to consider:

- You need more pictures.

- Unless you run your essay through spelling/grammar check, I wouldn’t tout that you are in college. You have a few errors. Also, I would add page breaks to create paragraphs; this allows easier reading rather than a jumbled, single paragraph. Your thoughts are rather disorganized. Maybe the paragraphs will help the continuity.

- I would take out this statement because it makes you seem needy and “emo”: “Through out the years I have had plenty of relationships but I can never find the girl for me. I feel almost alone like there is no girl for me”. Stay positive and upbeat. That will also eliminate the error 'through out' - should be 'throughout'.

- Add a few details about the type of girl you are attracted to in life, and expand on the hobbies you listed.

Mingle is a blast. I hope to see you in the forums!

You come up with the wierdiest stuff sometimes!

And forgot

Hello im new to mingle. ummm show sme luv. would luv some pointers pls .

Start your own topic and you can get feedback too!

Yeah, what she said!

I have to disagree with some of the ladies on here...
I don't think you need anymore pics. The one you have up is good enough. It beats some of the other profile pics I have seen on here... at least yours shows your face. One can get a good feel on what you look like based on the one you have up.

Everybody should have a least one smiling pic so we know they have nice teeth! I've met a couple of guys that never smiled in their pix and when we met in person their teeth were all mangled.

I ask for smiling pix now!

thank you for the advice. but i will not change my punctuation because it is how i talk.
but i will get more pics, i just cant stand taking them of my self.
Also, I have been checking out the community and I must say it seems like every one on here is way cool and I would like to meet any of you so your always welcome to hit me up.

Props for being YOU!