A Bipolar Thunder

Raining in my need of fire
Drowning in a breath of ether
The world is my Anchor
Your song of bliss my real Icor

Your Silky soft Soul
Your sweet scented spirit
Caresses my whole
Sactifies my birth

I pull you off my skin
Burn unwashable sins
My blood keeps leaking out
In search of its twin heart

I feel the warm embrace
Of your infinite grace
I crave this purity
Sanctified Unity

You are the prakriti
Of my inner Brahmi
Dharmic Activity
All for the Love of thee

Crouched into my tiger
Forever I remember
Our love is like lightning
A Bipolar Being.

Trance Xolarom

like it.

teasingbrunette

thanks

I thought it was an interesting write and well put together. I could see the depressive, as well as, the manic need. Good Job.

thank you for the feedback Seakolony

Your welcome.

Hello god are you there
Hello can you hear me
Will this darkness last for ever
grasping and reaching in emptiness
Lost, hopeless, tired, despondent
Oh God can YOU NOT SEE ME!
Shrouded in confusion
Not comprehending the affliction
You said Love will lead the way
Yet I'm still wandering aimlessly
CAN YOU SEE me!
Its not a fault of my own
I'm I to stand alone!
lost hopelessly
Can't see in front
nor behind
A monster
Such horror
I search
You
abscond
Left to my own accord
God are you there

Ah OK thanks

nice writting elsolo... exept next time i'd rather you start you own topic to post it... and since this topic is named after the poem i've put in the first post, you'de have more chance to be read by others if you make a topic for your own poetry!

I hope you find the light the day and some happiness in this life or beyond.

God sees you from within, it is the inteligence of life that animates every cell in your body. it's gift is the gift of life. the mechanisim is quite simple, you will get more of what you are thankfull for... be thankfull for things you do not yet have, and miracles will start happening. its true i've withnessed it and lved it for myself. you just have to take full responsability for yourself, and focus on what you want and desire, instead of focusing on what you don't have and the people and things you can blame for not having what you want.

by example lets imagine you are a kid who loves cookies. you go to your mother crying about how cruel she is that she did not give you a cookie today. she's likely to get pissed of from your attitude and punish you! on the other hand, go to your mother, and praise her for the delicious things she cooks for you everyday, adding that you really love her cookies, they are the best in the world. Now i think you're likely to get a handfull of them! everything works the same way in life, in my opinion anyway.

it does take some faith to be able to feel genuine gratitude for something you do not yet apparently have, but developing this faith is well worth it and works miracles, and moves mountains.

take care,
Regards,
Trance

Great poem- my favorite lines

"I feel the warm embrace
Of your infinite grace"

thank you

sorry man

don't be sorry elsolo i was just saying that you will get more people to read your poem if you make your own topic!! i do not personally mind that you posted it in that topic, i was just saying that for you

take care buddy