Topic: ~beauty~
writer_gurl's photo
Tue 05/18/10 07:07 PM
A pretty face
Wide eyes
A lovely shape
So why does she cry

Many stared from near
and far
Always beckoning there and here
offering the stars

They wanted her beauty
they want her wit
They want her humility
But throw it away when they have it

Some talk of forever
Some just play games
Some will have her never
Some will say she is the same

Her innocence was taken
with every vile word
Her smiles she was faking
Her torture no one heard

Their perverse wicked ways
Left her dirty and broken
Even through not a caress was lain
The real damage were the words spoken

Now she tries to hide
in her shell
She tells herself her beauty is a lie
As she lives in her own silent hell


no photo
Tue 05/18/10 07:20 PM
The love of ones beauty over-exposed, shows a hipocrites turned-up nose

A very nice write,,,,Writer gurl...flowerforyou

thewaterbearer's photo
Tue 05/18/10 07:23 PM
Niceflowerforyou

MotherTucker43's photo
Tue 05/18/10 07:25 PM
I like. flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Tue 05/18/10 08:50 PM
:heart:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=595N2Jg_mLg

writer_gurl's photo
Tue 05/18/10 09:52 PM


Niiice

mig25's photo
Sun 05/30/10 04:53 AM
I like this.

writer_gurl's photo
Tue 06/08/10 02:01 PM

Thanks bunches

Kleisto's photo
Tue 06/08/10 02:13 PM
Really deep poem.

Queene123's photo
Tue 06/08/10 03:46 PM

A pretty face
Wide eyes
A lovely shape
So why does she cry

Many stared from near
and far
Always beckoning there and here
offering the stars

They wanted her beauty
they want her wit
They want her humility
But throw it away when they have it

Some talk of forever
Some just play games
Some will have her never
Some will say she is the same

Her innocence was taken
with every vile word
Her smiles she was faking
Her torture no one heard

Their perverse wicked ways
Left her dirty and broken
Even through not a caress was lain
The real damage were the words spoken

Now she tries to hide
in her shell
She tells herself her beauty is a lie
As she lives in her own silent hell





adding to your poem


a beauty is who you are
as others dont see
as your heart has a huge soul
and warm sensation
that shows of all the beauty that
is around.
hand a yellow rose. of friendship
and love
hand a red rose of passion and content
either way handing a rose shows
what kind of person they could be
even though you may tend to hide in
your own inner shell. its a reason
that is totally ment to be