What do you think about my profile?
what do you think its missing?
what needs to be taken out?

You look a little ill at ease in the pic & the writing it terrible. I think it'd be good to add some more pics & edit all the misspellings. Welcome to mingle!!!

More pics. Gives viewers a sense of your personality.

I agree....correct the errors and additional pics would be great too.

Welcome!

I think the OP has trouble with vowels

Hi!!!

Welcome!!!


Tammy

Thank you
Tessa02
" ill at ease in the pic " I don't really understand what that means?

Thank you
OKCUTIE67

Thank you
Fade2Black

Thank you Tammy xox

I will try to post more pictures, I am camera shy, or more less I hate taking pictures unless I have to for ID, but for all your lovely faces I will post some more.

That's exactly what I was getting at!! I can tell from your pic that you don't like taking pics. But, it really shows your nervousness about having your picture taken. I hate taking pics too!! So, mine aren't all that great!! But, a variety of pics everyone doesn't always see the same expression!!

I HAD a friend on here once,,who you remind me of,,,
THATS a good thing,,he was a cool dude,,he also designed webs,,

IF,,your looking to meet some ladies,,I would take out much that you wrote about your hobby,,and show MORE of what a chick might like
like the type places you like to go and would love to take HER to,,and so on,,,ladies get bored quickly if all of your profile speaks mostly in DETAILS of your job or hobby,,so the less,,the better...lol
OR,,,IF THATS kind-of tough for ya to do,,
WORK THAT into your profile by giving THEM substance of WOMEN,,,and what sites you may have or done about them or for them to contribute their minds into...?
Welcome here,,and just be you, relax,,and join in the forums and post a bunch,,so ZYOUR seen,,,have some fun man,,,

This statement makes me cringe!

"at the moment I would like to find a good female to be a friend, a date, and enjoy romantic moments ..."

Using the word "female" in this context is rather insulting. Its urban slang and a quality lady will not respond.

Consider using 'lady', 'woman' or even 'girl'.

You have several spelling and capitalization errors as already mentioned. Run your essay through Microsoft Word to help you fix the problems if you can’t easily proof your own work.

Definitely add more pix. You look too stiff and unfriendly in the one you have. SMILE!!!

The first impression you give is with pictures and your writing; think of it as a resume for dating. Would you “hire” you?

Also, join the forums to meet lots of cool people.

Good comments Melody. ^^^

Here's the bottom like OP ..

(((((((((( RELAX ))))))))))

I will conceder some of the idea's in "iam4u" post but I would like to debate with you more on that topic in a later post.
And change the "Female" to hmm "girl" in my profile.
this sounds good, as for spelling and grammar, hum I did run it though Microsoft Word 2007, but I will see if I can get one of my friends to help me more with it "or go back to school" that is a must to learn proper English.

as for Pics hum ok I will post some Pics I have on Facebook to start out with, most of them are over 2 years old.

any idea's to what kind of pics should I post?

Like web cam pics?
pics with friends "I have none taken"

Places, wear wise, any ideas?

HI

ANY clear, focused pix are great wherein you are smiling. Pix that are taken while you are doing some of your fave hobbies are good too. If you have pix with friends just don't use that as a main because the viewer won't know which person you are in the pic. Save group pix for extras in your album.

Your profile looks great now!