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Topic: Seeking the right Road.
iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 04/27/10 04:12 PM Edited by iam4u on Tue 04/27/10 04:25 PM
Oh LORD Please help give me the strength I need, Your guildance, wisdom, and forever to YOU, I heed. I have lost sight of my dreams, of me, my desires to see. Show me which path leads me back to my road. Help me through YOUR warmth, in this hour of my cold. Be-still my heart, so I can hear your voice. I live only for you and my time to rejoice. Yet, still in this plain, I need to make a clear choice. This is my PRAYER I say each day, searching for my best way. My mind so full, thoughts and wishes, fearful of what might not be. Pictures, dreams, forever passing by, me waiting to only see. Which path leads me to find this love I feel inside. I am so tired of broken dreams, and hearts that only hide Yet if my paths all keep me looking far and wide. Then all I shall do and be, is only to abide.

vikrnle Joined Wed 01/27/10 Posts: 493	Tue 04/27/10 04:14 PM
Sweet

vivian2981 Joined Thu 04/16/09 Posts: 37289	Tue 04/27/10 04:16 PM
SWEET!

Redsoxfan1 Joined Sat 12/29/07 Posts: 8388	Tue 04/27/10 04:17 PM
Very nice, (((Terry)))!! I like that!! Thank you for sharing!!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76433	Tue 04/27/10 06:46 PM
May you find all that you seek And yes I do believe this is where it belongs

Tessa02 Joined Tue 02/16/10 Posts: 2519	Tue 04/27/10 07:12 PM
Great write!! Really like it!!!

CowboyGH Joined Mon 10/05/09 Posts: 13651	Wed 04/28/10 09:28 AM
very good :)

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Sashalynn Joined Sat 02/27/10 Posts: 57	Wed 04/28/10 08:08 PM Edited by Sashalynn on Wed 04/28/10 08:09 PM
Hi Terry, Seems are roads have not been crossing on here much... But as always I love your work, your words are so intune with so many of us. It is always nice to be riminded that we are never fully alone, and we do have someone who we can always go to when it seems there is no one else. I thank you again Terry for you being you, And I thank God for you to... Sincely your Friend, Sash

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 04/29/10 01:52 PM
Hi Terry, Seems are roads have not been crossing on here much... But as always I love your work, your words are so intune with so many of us. It is always nice to be riminded that we are never fully alone, and we do have someone who we can always go to when it seems there is no one else. I thank you again Terry for you being you, And I thank God for you to... Sincely your Friend, Sash Thanks Sash,and as life seems full and passing,,we see our lives running away from us,,way to fast,,ITS GREAT to have friends who express their warmth and compassions when your head is dazed,,and your mind seems glazed. Thank you EVERYONE here who took the time to let THIS MAN know,, YOU CARE and to make me ALWAYS FEEL,,YOUR FRIENDSHIPS!!!! YOU GUYS """"""ROCK""""""",,and I am but a rolling stone of words,,,,,,

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Thu 04/29/10 01:54 PM
Oh LORD Please help give me the strength I need, Your guildance, wisdom, and forever to YOU, I heed. I have lost sight of my dreams, of me, my desires to see. Show me which path leads me back to my road. Help me through YOUR warmth, in this hour of my cold. Be-still my heart, so I can hear your voice. I live only for you and my time to rejoice. Yet, still in this plain, I need to make a clear choice. This is my PRAYER I say each day, searching for my best way. My mind so full, thoughts and wishes, fearful of what might not be. Pictures, dreams, forever passing by, me waiting to only see. Which path leads me to find this love I feel inside. I am so tired of broken dreams, and hearts that only hide Yet if my paths all keep me looking far and wide. Then all I shall do and be, is only to abide. Thank You..for this,enjoyed.