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Topic: Lonely Teardrops
sugarjen Joined Tue 11/07/06 Posts: 2265	Fri 04/09/10 06:06 PM
Lonely teardrop Slowly you form In my minds eye A single salty blue tear Oh lonely teardrop Do you dare fall at all My memories bring you to life My sorrow giving you form My heartache in times i was torn Lonely teardrop How slowly you form Not only in my minds eye But now in my sad blue eyes Falling...not only one But thousands, for thousands to see Staining my face,frozin in place Oh lonely teardrops......

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 04/09/10 06:44 PM
A single tear to fall, will start be build a wall, many, many, tears. Makes it grow tall. I am sorry your tears are flowing down, you know I am always around,,if you need me.. I hope this is just a thought, but I feel its a loss.. This was a sad poem, and it is very heart-felt.. hugs and love for ya.....

dnc4Him Joined Fri 11/14/08 Posts: 2035	Fri 04/09/10 06:47 PM
beautiful! hope your heart heals quickly!

bedlum1 Joined Tue 05/12/09 Posts: 5335	Fri 04/09/10 06:50 PM
Lonely teardrop Slowly you form In my minds eye A single salty blue tear Oh lonely teardrop Do you dare fall at all My memories bring you to life My sorrow giving you form My heartache in times i was torn Lonely teardrop How slowly you form Not only in my minds eye But now in my sad blue eyes Falling...not only one But thousands, for thousands to see Staining my face,frozin in place Oh lonely teardrops...... awwwww beautiful...i like it

ann24 Joined Sun 04/22/07 Posts: 45	Fri 04/09/10 07:07 PM
very touching poem.

sugarjen Joined Tue 11/07/06 Posts: 2265	Fri 04/09/10 07:09 PM
Thanks everyone for reading! iam...this isn't how i am feeling now, it just came to me at work today and it wanted to share it.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 04/09/10 08:08 PM
Thanks everyone for reading! iam...this isn't how i am feeling now, it just came to me at work today and it wanted to share it. wiping my forehead with backhand,,,COOL,,,lol. THEN,,,NOW,,i CAN dance a jig TO YA POSTING AGIN,,,, You know me,,always thinking to much,,,Have a great WEEKEND!!!

Queene123 Joined Tue 06/26/07 Posts: 17056	Fri 04/09/10 09:23 PM
you gave me a idea for a poem http://mingle2.com/topic/show/270646

nvkikigirl Joined Thu 03/05/09 Posts: 3942	Sat 04/10/10 11:49 PM
Lonely teardrop Slowly you form In my minds eye A single salty blue tear Oh lonely teardrop Do you dare fall at all My memories bring you to life My sorrow giving you form My heartache in times i was torn Lonely teardrop How slowly you form Not only in my minds eye But now in my sad blue eyes Falling...not only one But thousands, for thousands to see Staining my face,frozin in place Oh lonely teardrops...... great writing!!

dpsycho Joined Sun 02/14/10 Posts: 1	Tue 04/13/10 09:43 PM
A lonely teardrop cant even hold our emotions and our miseries sometime we fill hopless and sometime our tears hold us as strength O TEARS.... Hold me,, mend me,, let me feel wetty in your armes

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