Topic: Andrew #2
samantha198403's photo
Fri 10/06/06 02:56 PM
you used to be my father
i used to trust in you
i used to believe in you
you were my daddy
but wouldnt you think
that eventually i would figure out
all your lies
i used to have faith
that you would come around
id tell everyone you would
you made a liar out of me
i figured i was the one
without the life
without the career
without love
but all along it was you
i actually felt sorrry for you
now i see i dont need you
i have my life
i have my aspirations
i have the love of everyone around me
you are not my burden
i have enough
it may be difficult at times
but i can handle it all on my own


Samantha Marie Rice

smileyfrog84's photo
Fri 10/06/06 03:46 PM
I liked your poem it was reall I am 7 months pargant And i printted off
ur poem and I am going two send it two her father a picse of shit.

samantha198403's photo
Fri 10/06/06 04:46 PM
thank you. good luck with your pregnancy, and i wish you all the best.
p.s., my father hasnt even seen it yet

Jimi366's photo
Fri 10/06/06 08:42 PM
I really like this.
You have talent!
You reached into your soul
for this one and I FELT it.
I look forward to seeing more
from you!