Topic: Another Breath
SquizTheClown's photo
Wed 03/31/10 06:20 PM
A bit of a dark poem :)

Another Breath

Feel the blade slip in
Separate the skin
Numb the darkest part of me
And help the fools to see

The pain it never leaves
A broken heart that grieves
A heart that cannot love again
A heart that’s filled with sin

The point of no return
Time to live or burn
A minute more to contemplate
Stay the hand or push the blade

Another day of pain
Living in my shame
Yet again I flirt with death
And come back to take another breath


bastet126's photo
Wed 03/31/10 06:22 PM
dark and light we are made of, writing comes from both places.flowerforyou

FaithfulOne78's photo
Wed 03/31/10 06:47 PM
Good Job...nice write!! flowerforyou

dnc4Him's photo
Wed 03/31/10 07:04 PM
I feel your struggle...always breathe again!

no photo
Thu 04/01/10 04:01 AM
drinker LIFE is a pain,,,WE just sense it out,,,,wink
NICE WRITE Bro...drinker