Topic: 3/28/10 a new poem
GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Sun 03/28/10 04:05 PM
Whisps of people,
In my life,
They are real,
but pass me by.

One second there,
the next they are not,
Sometimes I ask,
what curse have I got.

There is a person,
That will not be smoke,
Someone that shows me,
That I'm not a joke.

They will not vanish,
and tell me goodbye,
And I will go on,
A penantant guy.

Seems that reminders,
are thrown to the wind,
reminders that someday,
I'll be happy again.

So as I continue,
to go through the haze,
The whisps of these people,
Are creating my days.

dnc4Him's photo
Sun 03/28/10 04:07 PM
beautiful!

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Sun 03/28/10 04:08 PM
nice ..:smile:

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Sun 03/28/10 04:09 PM
Thank you.

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Sun 03/28/10 04:10 PM
I think Ive been there.....smiles a thankyou..
teasingbrunette

EarthSprite's photo
Sun 03/28/10 04:11 PM
The whisps of these people,
are creating my days..


Much to ponder on my friend....flowerforyou

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Sun 03/28/10 04:12 PM
flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 03/28/10 04:23 PM
Nice write.flowerforyou

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Sun 03/28/10 04:56 PM
Edited by vikrnle on Sun 03/28/10 04:57 PM

Whisps of people,
In my life,
They are real,
but pass me by.

One second there,
the next they are not,
Sometimes I ask,
what curse have I got.

There is a person,
That will not be smoke,
Someone that shows me,
That I'm not a joke.

They will not vanish,
and tell me goodbye,
And I will go on,
A penantant guy.




Seems that reminders,
are thrown to the wind,
reminders that someday,
I'll be happy again.

So as I continue,
to go through the haze,
The whisps of these people,
Are creating my days.


Sweet, i like the way you look at life in such a positive view your poems are beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Sun 03/28/10 04:59 PM
flowerforyou :heart:

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Sun 03/28/10 08:07 PM
some people just don't understand my poems... I'm truly sorry for that... but it's my true feelings.

thewaterbearer's photo
Sun 03/28/10 08:11 PM
I can relate to your poem it is lovelyflowerforyou

bastet126's photo
Sun 03/28/10 08:13 PM

some people just don't understand my poems... I'm truly sorry for that... but it's my true feelings.


the beauty is in the eye of every beholder, but only the writer knows it's truth. flowerforyou

Tessa02's photo
Sun 03/28/10 09:35 PM


some people just don't understand my poems... I'm truly sorry for that... but it's my true feelings.


the beauty is in the eye of every beholder, but only the writer knows it's truth. flowerforyou


Whatever you're feeling as long as you get it out there who cares if anyone else understands but you? Enjoyed the poem.:smile:

ArtGurl's photo
Sun 03/28/10 11:03 PM
I hear you brokenheart flowers

GRIFFIN_LIZZARD's photo
Mon 03/29/10 09:53 AM

I hear you brokenheart flowers


flowerforyou smooched

nvkikigirl's photo
Mon 03/29/10 08:45 PM
drinker flowerforyou