Topic: A Perfect Imperfection
goofydoof's photo
Thu 03/25/10 07:42 PM
Everyday we walked home from school,
And that made up the happiest minutes,
Of a forgettable day,
All the while I showed my love to you in bits,
While dragging my bag like a mule.

Why did this have to happen?
Why did I fall in love?
Why did you have to be my perfect imperfection?

Do you still remember my words of stupid wisdom,
How I said perfection was possible only without us,
Oh how wrong I was!
All this while that I kept my love inconspicuous,
And hinted at it in a mere stupid conundrum.

Why did this have to happen?
Why did I fall in love?
Why did you have to be my perfect imperfection?

You are a beautiful human,
And you are perfect,
My beautiful perfect human,
I wish I could say.
Instead he came and took you away,
Far far away from me,
From me.

Why did this have to happen?
Why did I fall in love?
Why did you have to be my perfect imperfection?

I know he is the perfect guy and I'm the friend,
I know he is the lover and I'm the supporter.
He is your imperfect perfection,
But hey baby give me one chance to show that I can be better,
To make you happy my energy I will expend.

Why did this have to happen?
Why did I fall in love?
Why did you have to be my perfect imperfection?
My perfect imperfection.


NOTE: this is a poem I wrote for a girl to whom I always said that perfection could never exist in the presence of humans. I have since realised how wrong I was, alas, by then it was too late. brokenheart

kc0003's photo
Thu 03/25/10 07:46 PM
welcome.....drinker

no photo
Thu 03/25/10 08:31 PM

NOTE: this is a poem I wrote for a girl to whom I always said that perfection could never exist in the presence of humans. I have since realised how wrong I was, alas, by then it was too late.

Its NOT that we have PERFECT humans,,its that in a FEW we FIND THEM PERFECT..:wink: drinker drinker

Nice write man!!!!!

laura329's photo
Fri 03/26/10 12:08 PM
Friends often make the best romantic couples. Give her time to realize that the support a partner provides you, is one of the most needed dynamics in a relation.
It's all in the interpretation-"new guy" may not find her to be perfect in the long term. So don't give up!

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Fri 03/26/10 12:11 PM
drinker drinker drinker

goofydoof's photo
Fri 03/26/10 08:24 PM
@laura: i'd rather she doesn't leave "prince charming" cuz i feel they are perfect for each other.. and as her friend.. i am happy because she is happy :)

s1owhand's photo
Fri 03/26/10 10:20 PM
very nice