Topic: The best way to FAIL !!
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Mon 03/01/10 04:35 AM
I try to the limit !! 8 days a week

even when i lie on the bed, i just can't sleep

all this thought of being 2nd has made me quite weak

and i can't do nothing except grind my teeth

my stamina is running out, its falling quite steep

and the road is getting longer i don't know how much i can keep

this is the situation where fear starts to creep

the chances not looking good, things are quite bleak

as i try harder i keep getting further from the peak

but i will never give up, just dig down deep

into my soul where my hope starts to seep

always go out trying, never sit down and weep

difficulties are life's way of showing that it's not meek

so just go out there and give it while humming these words in a beat


please be easy on me.. it's my first attempt !!

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Mon 03/01/10 01:49 PM
As a first attempt, well done...flowerforyou

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Tue 03/02/10 04:54 AM
Thanks...flowerforyou