Topic: Pain
writer_gurl's photo
Sun 02/21/10 06:13 PM
The pain
The torment
It makes me insane
and my energy spent

What was once light
Has become gray
My world is dark as night
though it is in the middle of day

A zombie I walk
Not caring
The shadows that stalk
That made me numb and unstaring

My heart is broken
My skin is cold
Not a word is spoken
feel better, I am told

Darkness envelopes me
blanketing me under its hold
It is hard to see
How it is chilling my very soul

wannacuddlewthme's photo
Sun 02/21/10 06:16 PM
Wow.Good oneflowerforyou

writer_gurl's photo
Sun 02/21/10 06:23 PM

Wow.Good oneflowerforyou


Thank you...it is the way I feel

Monier's photo
Sun 02/21/10 06:27 PM
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no photo
Sun 02/21/10 06:28 PM
Nice write. I've been there, it sucks. Hope you feel better soon.flowerforyou

Ladylid2012's photo
Sun 02/21/10 06:28 PM
Awww, the only way out of darkness is to go into the light

Love and light sent flowerforyou :heart:

no photo
Sun 02/21/10 06:48 PM
{{{W-G}}}:smile: :heart: flowerforyou

motowndowntown's photo
Sun 02/21/10 06:55 PM
Don't any young folks ever have any happy feelings????

writer_gurl's photo
Sun 02/21/10 07:00 PM

Don't any young folks ever have any happy feelings????


Not when a pet died....What is sooo happy about that? Should I be happy then???? Is DEATH something to be happy about???

motowndowntown's photo
Sun 02/21/10 07:14 PM
Death is part of the cycle of life. It happens to all of us.

Don't get so defensive. I was only making a comment on the work, not the reason for it.

writer_gurl's photo
Sun 02/21/10 08:58 PM

Death is part of the cycle of life. It happens to all of us.

Don't get so defensive. I was only making a comment on the work, not the reason for it.


Yes, I agree with you there..Death does happen to all of us...But that doesn't mean people have to be so cruel & neutral about it...it was almost cold and calculating

I am sorry I became defensive, and yes, I am happy most of the time...But not today