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The pain
The torment It makes me insane and my energy spent What was once light Has become gray My world is dark as night though it is in the middle of day A zombie I walk Not caring The shadows that stalk That made me numb and unstaring My heart is broken My skin is cold Not a word is spoken feel better, I am told Darkness envelopes me blanketing me under its hold It is hard to see How it is chilling my very soul |
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Wow.Good one
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Wow.Good one Thank you...it is the way I feel |
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Nice write. I've been there, it sucks. Hope you feel better soon.
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Awww, the only way out of darkness is to go into the light
Love and light sent |
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{{{W-G}}}
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Don't any young folks ever have any happy feelings????
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Don't any young folks ever have any happy feelings???? Not when a pet died....What is sooo happy about that? Should I be happy then???? Is DEATH something to be happy about??? |
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Death is part of the cycle of life. It happens to all of us.
Don't get so defensive. I was only making a comment on the work, not the reason for it. |
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Death is part of the cycle of life. It happens to all of us. Don't get so defensive. I was only making a comment on the work, not the reason for it. Yes, I agree with you there..Death does happen to all of us...But that doesn't mean people have to be so cruel & neutral about it...it was almost cold and calculating I am sorry I became defensive, and yes, I am happy most of the time...But not today |
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