Topic: Acuity
kc0003's photo
Sun 02/21/10 05:28 AM
Edited by kc0003 on Sun 02/21/10 05:29 AM

where I once saw you
in the majesty of the
sunrise
I now see an insipid
horizon
where I once held you
in steady arms
I now tremble
with the `membrance
of empty words

now I find myself
alone
growing accustom
to not sleeping
living the lifestyle of a
vampire (minus the powers)
and yet,
I’ve never felt so
mortal

so I hide behind the
fake smile,
I’ve dressed myself in
for weeks
and wash down
another
capsulized
diversion
as I sip from tears
falling on pale skin

it’s a sobering realization
that I’d sooner
touch a star
than reach
even a portion
of your heart




kc '10

burgundybry's photo
Sun 02/21/10 05:39 AM
this...so describes something I went through in the past year, and my present feelings about it...great write, kc!

no photo
Sun 02/21/10 06:35 AM
kc....feeling the words....teasingbrunette

jimz's photo
Sun 02/21/10 06:44 AM
awesome, this poem spoke to me, feeling the words
good stuff

no photo
Sun 02/21/10 07:33 AM
full of such feeling and longing-painfully feltflowerforyou

no photo
Sun 02/21/10 08:03 AM
So felt, so awesome...

s1owhand's photo
Sun 02/21/10 08:41 AM
Edited by s1owhand on Sun 02/21/10 08:43 AM
inspired - unending circle

flowerforyou kc

no photo
Sun 02/21/10 10:46 AM
I :heart: this.

kc0003's photo
Sun 02/21/10 02:58 PM
thank you all...

flowerforyou

drinker

Sharris's photo
Sun 02/21/10 06:11 PM
was it something I...?

kc0003's photo
Sun 02/21/10 07:18 PM

was it something I...?






ha! sadie, no way...flowerforyou

Sharris's photo
Sun 02/21/10 08:28 PM


was it something I...?

ha! sadie, no way...flowerforyou

Whew!!