whats the point in wishing
its like standing on the beach
with no bait
fishing

whats the point of dreaming
when you always end up
back where you started
in your bed
screaming

whats the point in hope
like a one way wish
alusive like
the metaphorical fish
will it happen?
nope

whats the point in life
with no purpose
no wishes
no dreams
no hope
no luck
and no wife


so why do we keep going
and keep our heads high
when the truth
we are knowing
are lies

must be missplaced trust
it will happen
it must

really great write!

Very nice

I liked it alot

very nice!

This reminds me of me,,on here,,and in here,,,when I first joined..
A very cool write my friend,,and I truly hope YOU find YOUR'S faster than I...

Nice!

Nice write. I think we keep hoping because without hope, we die.

glad you like it peeps. Im off to hang myself





that was clearly a joke.

I knew THAT,,,lol,other-wise I would have already sent you an email,

Impressive!

Great write...Hope is eternal, even when we don't think so...

cheers, wemons

Ah whats the point? This was said to me by my Dad,,three weeks before he passed...wink, Nice write man,,,I just thought the title.
here and remembered.

sorry dude

sounds like a funny man, your dad

i think they might be my last words. that or "the money is under the....."

Im thinking mine..

And thanks,,,he WAS,,,many things,

Funny,,,,well,,,,nahhhhhhhhhh,,,but thats cool.

now thats an interesting thread, last words