Topic: Pinky (All that Remains)
FearandLoathing's photo
Sat 02/06/10 02:06 PM
One finger down for another lost task,
And they all say 'this too will pass,'
Forget the mottos and catch-phrases,
I don't even know the next phase of the maze, I'm afraid,

Ended by putting down the blade to the leg,
Started with another verbalized, steady, death.

I don't even know how to shine properly,
I couldn't be a knight if I lied to claim sovereignty,
I really am hopeless and lost, bleakness to the mist,
I really can't be taught, sleeping to a kiss.

The middle finger goes down, another one gone,
Everyone always says 'what's done is done,'
The worse thing is that they are always wrong,
These words will run, tip of a tongue, the curse long.

Ended by putting down the blade to the leg,
Started with another verbalized, steady, death.

I don't even know how to shine properly,
I couldn't be a knight if I lied to claim sovereignty,
I really am hopeless and lost, bleakness to the mist,
I really can't be taught, sleeping to a kiss.

I am a personal footnote of what 'not to do,'
My own perennial dues are now out for all of you.

I don't even know how to shine properly,
I couldn't be a knight if I lied to claim sovereignty,
I really am hopeless and lost, bleakness to the mist,
I really can't be taught, sleeping to a kiss.

Another finger down for another lost soul,
They all will say 'you're digging your hole,'
Forgot the moment and traded it all for the calm,
I begin to fall, trademark roll, another sold, culled.

Ended by putting the blade to my leg,
Started this verbal, death, threat.

I don't even know how to shine properly,
I couldn't be a knight if I lied to claim sovereignty,
I really am hopeless and lost, bleakness to the mist,
I really can't be taught, sleeping to a kiss.

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Sat 02/06/10 03:05 PM
Awesome write, I love it.flowerforyou

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Sat 02/06/10 05:30 PM
I love that..."..sleeping to a kiss..."...

Excellent write..flowerforyou

SunnyMcleod's photo
Sat 02/06/10 05:46 PM
The last paragraph...:thumbsup: Love it Mr.Fear, love it.

FearandLoathing's photo
Sun 02/07/10 11:53 AM
Thanks everyone.flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Tue 02/09/10 09:59 AM
Mr Fear,, I beg to differ you so do Shine flowers

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Tue 02/09/10 10:02 AM
Deep, heart felt, enjoyable flowers