Topic: Dusk....
Cryptedoutlaw420's photo
Mon 01/18/10 11:58 AM


You still sit there

Just as we used to do

Words remain the same

Same as it once was

Here and there things are spoken

Nothing more then a gentle wave

Everything's been forgotten

All I do is sit and write

Remember the sparkle in your eyes

The first time you saw me

Angel fallen from above

Brought the sunshine upon my face

Though dusk has come

Still have that glimpse of sunshine

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Mon 01/18/10 11:59 AM
Nice write.flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Mon 01/18/10 12:04 PM
There is a gentleness in the ebb and flow of this reminiscent of the ebb and flow of love ... it doesn't disappear it just changes clothes ... only one comes with the label 'romantic'.

Welcome flowerforyou

Cryptedoutlaw420's photo
Mon 01/18/10 12:04 PM
thanks ive been doin alot more writing recently lets see where it guides me