Topic: the patter
solberry's photo
Sun 01/17/10 11:15 AM


the patter from his gob
did constantly disturb
and even though no-one did listen
all around they showed suspicion
even when the verbalism
ceased to attract antagonism
the truth of what had been disclosed
was blaspheme to the ears of most

Sharris's photo
Sun 01/17/10 12:26 PM



the patter from his gob
did constantly disturb
and even though no-one did listen
all around they showed suspicion
even when the verbalism
ceased to attract antagonism
the truth of what had been disclosed
was blaspheme to the ears of most


"the truth of what had been disclosed
was blaspheme to the ears of most"

it continues to disturb.
I love the folds and how it peels, the more I read.