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Edited by
plastic_pancakes
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Thu 01/14/10 09:43 PM
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What seemed to be a moment
was a torrent or a river that flows ceaselessly releasing me from the bondage of knowledge. Time implodes again and fraternization between patients is another means of containment in the spirit. Can you hear it? Silence. When all the fans are off; the halls are narrow. And all thoughts now are focused on the rustling of a still and saturated nature though quite hated for so long. Empty is the chamber and blame is just a word that churns the embers of an anger that does not involve the stranger. Yet eyes peer, now gazing, and appear with no fear grazing on some lines that pen themselves away just fine inside a little book. When the moment dries up like the lever they ogle over, as you toggle with it, trying to be clever, you remember - that it doesn't matter anyways; the room is just another temple emptied for the the shallow and the strays. |
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I love your writing!
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I love your writing! Awww... Thanks. |
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Nice write C
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I it. As usual.
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Awesome!!
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might be my favorite of yours, i dont know they all are cool
deep,symbolic yet more... |
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Well done
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Your writing makes me hungry!!
And.... Thats a good thing!!! Tammy |
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Empty to one room, the silence of gloom, this voice-less tomb.
Nice write man... |
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