Topic: Today
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Thu 01/14/10 09:33 PM
Edited by plastic_pancakes on Thu 01/14/10 09:43 PM
What seemed to be a moment
was a torrent or a river
that flows ceaselessly
releasing me from the bondage of knowledge.

Time implodes again
and fraternization between patients
is another means
of containment
in the spirit.
Can you hear it? Silence.

When all the fans are off;
the halls are narrow.
And all thoughts now
are focused on the rustling
of a still and saturated nature though
quite hated for so long.

Empty is the chamber
and blame is just a word
that churns the embers of an anger
that does not involve the stranger.

Yet eyes peer, now gazing,
and appear with no fear
grazing on some lines that pen
themselves away
just fine inside a little book.

When the moment dries up
like the lever
they ogle over, as you toggle with it,
trying to be clever,
you remember -
that it doesn't matter anyways;
the room is just another temple
emptied for the the shallow and the strays.

sagacious22's photo
Thu 01/14/10 09:36 PM
flowerforyou I love your writing!

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Thu 01/14/10 09:43 PM

flowerforyou I love your writing!


Awww... Thanks.

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Thu 01/14/10 09:49 PM
Nice write C flowers

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Thu 01/14/10 10:40 PM
I :heart: it. As usual.:thumbsup:

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Fri 01/15/10 06:02 AM
Awesome!!

jimz's photo
Fri 01/15/10 07:13 AM
might be my favorite of yours, i dont know they all are cool
deep,symbolic yet more...

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Fri 01/15/10 11:19 AM
flowers

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Fri 01/15/10 11:44 AM
Well done bigsmile

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Fri 01/15/10 11:49 AM
Your writing makes me hungry!!

And....


Thats a good thing!!!



Tammy:heart:

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Sat 01/16/10 09:48 AM
Empty to one room, the silence of gloom, this voice-less tomb.


Nice write man...drinker