Topic: law of freedom
jimz's photo
Tue 01/05/10 06:55 PM
Edited by jimz on Tue 01/05/10 07:16 PM
i went before the manifested judge
when i was sixteen and running
before the attempted magistrate
i was sentenced back home
after the judge
ate the dove
he raised a hammer
to my fathers head
yet his father
took the blow
but im the one
said to be
left to drown
so i made waves
and constructed freedom
yet instructed freedom
cant be won
so they sentenced me
to the rubber room
i made it a justified escape
reason in a dream
wasnt life all a dream
yet when i fell
i fell into a well
somewhere back
i judged the judge



LAMom's photo
Tue 01/05/10 07:52 PM
As I hold you...
Namaste'flowers

jimz's photo
Tue 01/05/10 08:41 PM

As I hold you...
Namaste'flowers


sweetflowerforyou

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Tue 01/05/10 11:39 PM
embarassed Sorry jim,,I had toput on this disquiseembarassed
It won't show my face man,,,embarassed I'm wanted and this was about law and a judge so,,,I had to hide tocome-in,,,
GREAT poem man,,embarassed drinker

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Tue 01/05/10 11:52 PM
lol T...Busted...!!!!!

Jim, you are a true Minstrel through and through...

jimz's photo
Wed 01/06/10 10:07 AM
If you could be busted for being cool, than I can see T. being a most wanted mandrinker

peace

jimz's photo
Wed 01/06/10 10:12 AM

lol T...Busted...!!!!!

Jim, you are a true Minstrel through and through...


you are truly inspiring and a friend
peace

Sharris's photo
Wed 01/06/10 02:54 PM
I agree that you are a true minstrel,
You are open indeed..thank you...this honest

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Wed 01/06/10 07:41 PM

If you could be busted for being cool, than I can see T. being a most wanted mandrinker

peace
COOL+Jimz=smokin thanks man...and don't kid your self,

Your VERY cool dude...YOU carry that FLARE OF,,,,REAL,,

deep,,,meaningful expressions from within all we know.

That 60's kind of King of beat-nicks,,,

There in your coffee house, up on stage,,all in black,,

All the young kids gathered around,, waiting so breath-less

for YOUR next WORD used,,,,,AND THEN,,,,,YOU SPEAK, Silents

breaks into small gasps,,,and YOU say,,,,,,,,,peace...:wink:

As they all write it down on their tablets......He spoke,,the word

PEACE........as they all then turn to go outside and spread your

spoken word man.....:wink: drinker drinker drinker