Topic: rumored sea
jimz's photo
Wed 12/30/09 03:49 PM
Edited by jimz on Wed 12/30/09 04:27 PM
there are rumors of swelled lungs
whales are rumored spreading my lungs
rumored braced in brackets
sea squared off
boxed breathing
spreading

rumors
are swelling
the tides
shoring in

my brace broken
upended sea

drowning
in repose
released
rumored

coming in
whirlpools

naked eyes
rumored sea

oven boiling sea
burning hands
rumored

coming over
boxes of hard water
spreading

may i
spread a rumor
theres a herd of whales
bouncing in
maybe i know more
rumored mine
humored as i
box rocks
my sea runs free
unrumored
yet



pkh's photo
Wed 12/30/09 06:35 PM
flowerforyou good write,nice to see you

no photo
Thu 12/31/09 09:05 PM
How apt your write is...A pod of pilot whales beached themselves here in NZ a few days ago...The majority were escorted out to sea, and the ones who didn't make it, were ceremoniously blessed and buried in the sand and their spirits sent "home"...:heart: