He's got the eyes of an innocent
But he'll change so suddenly
To someone who'll rip your world apart
And leave you in the tragedy.
He's got a smile that turns you on
And knocks the others out
But despite your tries, you'll never know
Just what he's smiling about.

And you built your heart around
A mystery that pulls you to the ground
And you spend your nights in grief
Over a love that's brought you to your knees.

He's got a way of ****ing you
That makes you question all the rules
Like: when does love turn to abuse?
And are you cherished or just used?
He's got a way with words
That keeps you coming back for more
A way that makes you feel alive outside
But like you're dying at the core.

And you've built your future around
A tone of voice with no real sound
To keep you company at night
Or bring fulfillment to your life.

He's got these friends, always at his side
Mimicking his every move
And they make you feel there's something wrong
With everything you do.
He's got these problems so intense
That yours are never worth the time
And when you're crying in the night
He's conveniently deaf and blind.

And you built your world around
His frustrations and his frowns
But you cannot heal his wounds
So he's begun resenting you.

You've got the kind of heart
That's hesitating to let go
You've put in so much god**** work
No one could ever know.
You've got the kind of future plans
Expendable by his demands
Though once so set in stone
They all eroded in his hands.

And he's built his life around
Whatever he feels won't let him down
Though you've tried to lift him up
At last, you're just not strong enough...
It's not that you're not good enough.
Someday you'll see you've had enough
And learn to live again.

Great write. I suggest the title "Enigma."

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Hows that???

and its nice,,,but its content of him,,sucks,,,,Id leave that so fast he'd cum alone...... be safe, and careful

Thank you. I like that!

Ah believe me. I left that. But not without taking some inspiration with me. Thanks!

"..Charmeleon.." would be a good title...Like those beautiful looking lizards that can change colour then out comes its claws and it can be a mean fighting ugly thing...

Really liked your write too...

..............Catalyst; One that precipitates a process or event, especially without being involved in or changed by the consequences. A very good write, thank you for sharing.

Eros Eroded?

I really enjoyed this, and I liked the insight you provided through your words and the style... Amazing writing.

How about Bob...oh no that's me, or dufus could suffice.....it's a joke you have to be there...

seriously, "My pernicious love"

I can not help with a title... But it's an amazing write!

"Conveniently Blind" would be a good title.
It's at the heart of your poem and is a good summary of that guy.
Great write, and good for you for ending it.
You can't be happy with someone so wrapped up in themself.