Topic: Spoiled Gift (Eintou)
HuckleberryFinn's photo
Mon 12/21/09 05:55 AM
Spoiled Gift

a child
a gift from GOD
a flower from heaven
needing nourishment everyday
we have tainted the soil
killed the root
they die.....


Eintou (ngusa Saba)
African American style Poetry
FORMAT
2 words/syllables
4
6
8
6
4
2 "


MirrorMirror's photo
Mon 12/21/09 12:16 PM

Spoiled Gift

a child
a gift from GOD
a flower from heaven
needing nourishment everyday
we have tainted the soil
killed the root
they die.....


Eintou (ngusa Saba)
African American style Poetry
FORMAT
2 words/syllables
4
6
8
6
4
2 "





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