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I travel with light
Only to feel my heart From beyond i have dwelled Heart to Heart i have felt for Mine to only fell But that is life,but only to learn 
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I travel with light Only to feel my heart From beyond i have dwelled Heart to Heart i have felt for Mine to only fell But that is life,but only to learn
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Nice comment to you also? Peace be with 
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for Mine to only fell
^should this be "fall", or maybe I'm reading it wrong...in either case, short, powerful and gripping |
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for Mine to only fell ^should this be "fall", or maybe I'm reading it wrong...in either case, short, powerful and gripping maybe it should be "...mine TOO only fell"...just a thought i enjoyed this peice...
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nice
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..maybe it should be just as you wrote it,for that's just as you felt it...
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 Merry Christmas (((agrant))) |
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