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Edited by
Coreycomposer
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Sat 12/19/09 04:01 PM
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I cannot be you I must kiss whom I please.
I must call it true as the warm Florida breeze. When he puts me at ease I can cross all the seas and not even sneeze. I know this is right cause he enters my sight and my breathing gets tight so I know I must fight. With out his touch there is no light. Only mighty wind with no kite. |
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liked the ending metaphor...welcome, nicely done
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welcome...
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Follow your sights and welcome to this site,,wink,
Nice poem... |
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