Topic: I cannot be you.
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Sat 12/19/09 03:45 PM
Edited by Coreycomposer on Sat 12/19/09 04:01 PM
I cannot be you I must kiss whom I please.
I must call it true as the warm Florida breeze.
When he puts me at ease I can cross all the seas
and not even sneeze.
I know this is right cause he enters my sight
and my breathing gets tight so I know I must fight.
With out his touch there is no light.
Only mighty wind with no kite.

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Sat 12/19/09 05:47 PM
liked the ending metaphor...welcome, nicely done

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Sat 12/19/09 06:12 PM
welcome...drinker

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Sat 12/19/09 09:19 PM
Follow your sights and welcome to this site,,wink,
Nice poem...drinker