Topic: animal without soul
jimz's photo
Sat 12/19/09 10:43 AM
soon by signing blood
between man and reason
i sign

shes diamonds
buried deep
within without
abyss lit

ani
mals
design
legs made in desert
heart made of glass
the first sacrifice
it did not matter

and mind
mind your self
animal
without soul

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Sat 12/19/09 11:06 AM
This was awesome, jimz.

Ever read any Stephen Crane?

jimz's photo
Sat 12/19/09 11:29 AM
thank you, yes, I read him way back
peace

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Sat 12/19/09 05:45 PM
always a pleasure to read the abstract you perform so well...

age old argument, do animals have souls, ha we have to ask, we're at the top of the ANIMAL world....nicely done.

question though, do you feel comfortable with fragmenting sentences

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Sat 12/19/09 08:48 PM
Always a pleasure to read your writes drinker

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Sat 12/19/09 09:03 PM

soon by signing blood
between man and reason
i sign

shes diamonds
buried deep
within without
abyss lit

ani
mals
design
legs made in desert
heart made of glass
the first sacrifice
it did not matter

and mind
mind your self
animal
without soul
A Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr teeth grind grin for ya Jimmy,,,cool.