Topic: Painting the Night Sky
InnerBeauty507's photo
Fri 12/18/09 12:06 AM
Painting the Night Sky

you paint the night sky with your kiss
every soft touch
leaving shooting stars in its wake
the caress of your skin
tugs the moonbeams be to glow brighter, and stronger
like the strings of my heart
strumming a melody
of longing murmurs and wistful sighs
your lips are swallowing black holes
draining the breath of my being
lost in the inky darkness of lust
Twilight is the haven for our passion
cloaking the truth from the Daylight
you only love me in the shadows
dusky mornings chasing our tenderness away
the Sun is my enemy
a mirror I can’t escape

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Fri 12/18/09 12:10 AM
Great write.flowers

InnerBeauty507's photo
Fri 12/18/09 12:19 AM
thank you ma'm :)

kc0003's photo
Fri 12/18/09 05:34 AM
nicely done...flowerforyou

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Fri 12/18/09 12:58 PM
love this line

you only love me in the shadows

welcomewaving

InnerBeauty507's photo
Tue 12/22/09 01:43 AM
thank you guys so very much!
I really appreciate it :)

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Tue 12/22/09 02:38 AM
Very nice write... flowerforyou

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Tue 12/22/09 05:59 AM
lost in the inky darkness of lust
Twilight is the haven for our passion
cloaking the truth from the Daylight
you only love me in the shadows
dusky mornings chasing our tenderness away
the Sun is my enemy
a mirror I can’t escape

^an awesome ending, a joy to read, imaginativge and captivating....The sun is thine enemy, reflections are usually haunting....nice

InnerBeauty507's photo
Tue 12/22/09 03:01 PM
thank you huck!
this is actually one of the 3 poems I had already selected to go in my portfolio!
so im really glad you liked it!

MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 12/23/09 04:45 AM

Painting the Night Sky

you paint the night sky with your kiss
every soft touch
leaving shooting stars in its wake
the caress of your skin
tugs the moonbeams be to glow brighter, and stronger
like the strings of my heart
strumming a melody
of longing murmurs and wistful sighs
your lips are swallowing black holes
draining the breath of my being
lost in the inky darkness of lust
Twilight is the haven for our passion
cloaking the truth from the Daylight
you only love me in the shadows
dusky mornings chasing our tenderness away
the Sun is my enemy
a mirror I can’t escape








flowerforyou Very niceflowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 12/23/09 03:28 PM
flowers Nice