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Am I the one, your only one?
Taken by the wrist, and sharpened tips. Can I be your saviour, knight in shining armor? Another obsession that I watched until dawn. Can I take you out, enjoy another 'night on the town'? As if I'm cutting over and over again and again. Maybe I like the pain, perhaps I enjoy the shame? I just can't stop these feelings that are pent up. Probably is the hate, don't you think? I just wish I had an answer to this riddle. Do you think I belong here, think I think it is fair? You stole my pride and left me here, here I lie. Feel better now, now that you have knocked me down? Slip the slippers on for the nightly dinner of downers. Should I mix this concoction of Molotov cocktails? Slide into sleep, another comatose dream to repeat. Maybe I am a lost cause, maybe you had the right thought? Could it be, am I just that lost that I can't see? The road is starting to blur, the lines looking fuzzy and curved. I think this is the end, and I won't be back again. Goodbye... |
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I like it.
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Deeply felt-to the bone...
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You my friend, are amazing. I love this one. Sht I gotta start writing again!
 Keep at that Mr.Fear, keep at it. |
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Cheers.
Great imagery. |
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Cheers everyone!
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Thanks! After reading it I'm going to transition it into a lyric, I think.
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Am I the one, your only one? Taken by the wrist, and sharpened tips. Can I be your saviour, knight in shining armor? Another obsession that I watched until dawn. Can I take you out, enjoy another 'night on the town'? As if I'm cutting over and over again and again. Maybe I like the pain, perhaps I enjoy the shame? I just can't stop these feelings that are pent up. Probably is the hate, don't you think? I just wish I had an answer to this riddle. Do you think I belong here, think I think it is fair? You stole my pride and left me here, here I lie. Feel better now, now that you have knocked me down? Slip the slippers on for the nightly dinner of downers. Should I mix this concoction of Molotov cocktails? Slide into sleep, another comatose dream to repeat. Maybe I am a lost cause, maybe you had the right thought? Could it be, am I just that lost that I can't see? The road is starting to blur, the lines looking fuzzy and curved. I think this is the end, and I won't be back again. Goodbye... A very good write, you have taken a subject that for many is shrouded in shame and mystery and addressed it in a positive way. |
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Thanks! Going to keep the running theme when I turn it into a lyric.
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Thanks! Going to keep the running theme when I turn it into a lyric.
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awesome..loved it..
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Am I the one, your only one? Taken by the wrist, and sharpened tips. Can I be your saviour, knight in shining armor? Another obsession that I watched until dawn. Can I take you out, enjoy another 'night on the town'? As if I'm cutting over and over again and again. Maybe I like the pain, perhaps I enjoy the shame? I just can't stop these feelings that are pent up. Probably is the hate, don't you think? I just wish I had an answer to this riddle. Do you think I belong here, think I think it is fair? You stole my pride and left me here, here I lie. Feel better now, now that you have knocked me down? Slip the slippers on for the nightly dinner of downers. Should I mix this concoction of Molotov cocktails? Slide into sleep, another comatose dream to repeat. Maybe I am a lost cause, maybe you had the right thought? Could it be, am I just that lost that I can't see? The road is starting to blur, the lines looking fuzzy and curved. I think this is the end, and I won't be back again. Goodbye... nice
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