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Topic: ~woman,withdraw
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 12/14/09 06:04 PM
woman,withdraw withdraw your fire wade backwards through the foamy sea casting a stone net then throw yourself back onto the earth to take root and flourish again

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Mon 12/14/09 06:13 PM


cherie091279 Joined Thu 07/16/09 Posts: 1360	Mon 12/14/09 06:36 PM


HardKoreKid Joined Sun 12/13/09 Posts: 14	Mon 12/14/09 06:37 PM
thats a beautiful poem...:)..i like it..short sweet and potent

HuckleberryFinn Joined Wed 09/23/09 Posts: 753	Mon 12/14/09 09:24 PM
sounds like a man eating plant. all this flourishing and stuff...never retreat (withdraw), keep moving forward, you didn't buy those sneaks to go backwards.....:).....I get it, I'm just being facetious

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 12/16/09 07:14 PM
pkd,cherie.. HardKoreKid thankyou. Finn...I think you have a thing for my sneakers or is it the pink teasingbrunette

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Wed 12/16/09 09:42 PM
again, a great write

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