Topic: A critique of my profile would be appreciated | |
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The subject says it all.
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id say cut back on the info. give the ladies a reason to want to get to know you....but im a guy lol.
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Looks fine... you do have enough info on what your looking for.So I don't think anyone will be clueless.Good Luck in your search.
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Looks fine... you do have enough info on what your looking for.So I don't think anyone will be clueless.Good Luck in your search. she is a woman, she would know better then me. lol |
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looks good to me. You have a variety of pictures and a well written profile.
Good luck in your search |
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After reading your profile Captain Ahab I get the feeling you are looking for a second mate, not a first. One who can scrub the decks. Bucket the effluvia overboard. Scrape the barnacles. Then conduct a symphony orchestra, maybe Bolero, while she courtesans her way into the captains quarters. What a deal. Nice ad. Unless you are Moby Dick. Then you are probably starting to get that creepy feeling running down the nape of your whale neck. |
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I think its well written
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After reading your profile Captain Ahab I get the feeling you are looking for a second mate, not a first. Really? What gives that impression? What would you change to make it more appealing to you? |
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After reading your profile Captain Ahab I get the feeling you are looking for a second mate, not a first. Really? What gives that impression? What would you change to make it more appealing to you? I would explain the difference between a yacht and a boat. |
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You seem to know what you want and aren't afraid to put it out there. I think it is a great profile.
Good luck in your search. |
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