Topic: A critique of my profile would be appreciated
Seafire's photo
Mon 12/14/09 12:39 AM
The subject says it all.


YourDaddyDerek's photo
Mon 12/14/09 12:50 AM
id say cut back on the info. give the ladies a reason to want to get to know you....but im a guy lol.

aladytoo's photo
Mon 12/14/09 06:44 AM
Looks fine... you do have enough info on what your looking for.So I don't think anyone will be clueless.Good Luck in your search.

YourDaddyDerek's photo
Mon 12/14/09 03:36 PM

Looks fine... you do have enough info on what your looking for.So I don't think anyone will be clueless.Good Luck in your search.


she is a woman, she would know better then me. lol

yellowrose10's photo
Mon 12/14/09 03:38 PM
looks good to me. You have a variety of pictures and a well written profile.

Good luck in your search

soufiehere's photo
Mon 12/14/09 06:46 PM

After reading your profile Captain Ahab I get the feeling you are looking for a second mate, not a first. One who can scrub the decks. Bucket the effluvia overboard. Scrape the barnacles. Then conduct a symphony orchestra, maybe Bolero, while she courtesans her way into the captains quarters. What a deal.

Nice ad. Unless you are Moby Dick. Then you are probably starting to get that creepy feeling running down the nape of your whale neck.

misstina2's photo
Mon 12/14/09 06:50 PM
flowerforyou I think its well writtenflowerforyou

Seafire's photo
Tue 12/15/09 01:40 AM


After reading your profile Captain Ahab I get the feeling you are looking for a second mate, not a first.



Really? What gives that impression? What would you change to make it more appealing to you?


soufiehere's photo
Tue 12/15/09 12:30 PM



After reading your profile Captain Ahab I get the feeling you are looking for a second mate, not a first.

Really? What gives that impression? What would you change to make it more appealing to you?


I would explain the difference between a yacht and a boat.

Dragoness's photo
Tue 12/15/09 12:35 PM
You seem to know what you want and aren't afraid to put it out there. I think it is a great profile.

Good luck in your search.